Hi, oldmonty,

Number 3 of a row of 5 last poems I am about to review.

I found this particular poem more difficult to read. It seems to tell a story about the deceit of a woman, but in my honest opinion, it is too short, lacking information to truly appreciate this short poem.

Perhaps you can add one or two stanzas so the poet can elaborate more?

Because of this lack (in my view), the last two lines of the last stanza are difficult to read and don't have that flow.

Of the words she had spoken
Too late to change, he is dead.

It feels as if I, the reader, don't have enough insight into this cruel situation of a woman lying and deceiving a man.

I hope you have time to polish and tweak this poem somewhat to give it more body.

Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.

WakeUpAndLive

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .