Hi, oldmonty,

The last of the 5 poems I reviewed.

It has a well-deserved awardicon cause it is a beautiful and tender poem about the old army veteran looking back on his time with his sweetheart before leaving for the war.

It has a good flow and atmosphere with a lot of nostalgia. It is tranquil, and the stanzas are well written.

There is one suggestion I would like to give: to change the word airplane in the last stanza into the word airoplane. With that, it has a better rhyme.

But do with this suggestion what you like, it's only the honest opinion of one reader.

These are my reviews. I loved reading your work and hope to do so again soon.

Thank you for sharing, and please, keep on writing.

WakeUpAndLive

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .