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 Weighty Thoughts Open in new Window. [E]
"Write about the feelings you experience or things you notice while waiting..."
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Fyn!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge *Smile*

Ooh, I love a good surrealist poem. This feels like Tim Cantor's artwork... In fact, the one for ID's Dream shows a little girl floating through an abyss, perhaps reminiscent of Alice... I should see what his website looks like since Reflections dropped... *Think* Don't mind me, I'm a born rambler *Bird*

You've captured the moodiness of waiting for something, we're not even sure what, but it must be quite important. Nervousness, jitters, imagining things, and a general sense of unease prevails here. I caught the "where in the hole..." *Laugh* did you do that on purpose?

Yep, not much to say here. You know I don't like to pick at poetry, and this is really good free verse, painting a picture of - ooh, "slideways!" A new word! Love it *Cool*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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