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Greetings *Smile*

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Ah, the 7 syllable, 7 line poem. You've written a circular bit of philosophy here, using the prompt perfectly... except for the opening line. I'm pretty sure that only has 6 syllables. You can say "they say live for the questions" and that would make it flow better.

As for the philosophy here, it reminds me of some of the lyricism of Dan Reynolds, lead singer and songwriter for Imagine Dragons. It reminds us that life is meant to be lived and questions are meant to be asked... Whatever that means *Laugh*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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