Hi, Joto-Kai ,

I found this poem in your portfolio and thought to review it.

A haunting free verse bordering on mental struggle and fantasy, and death. Very powerful imagery and a good flow of words.

The central theme of this poem, as I read it, is the tension between despair and the longing for transcendence. The “splash of darkness” over “whiter snow” suggests a stark intrusion of sorrow into a once-pure or untouched state of being.

The poem follows from there.

I loved this poem because of its wonderful enclosed atmosphere. It is a world you can't escape from. At the same time, it's not bitter or gloomy. Hard to resist.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Because of its strength, I awarded it.

Keep on writing,

WakeUpAndLive

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