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 | Who owns the Planet?  [E] A writing for contest "To Grill a Christian." July 2025  |
| (4.5)| Greetings! I'm here for I Write 2025  What an exhausting month... Are you glad it's almost over? I sure am! You have taken a serious and thoughtful approach to the subject, keeping the prompt questions at the top of your essay to guide and maintain focus. I might suggest setting the prompt off in italics to emphasize they are not your words. You begin by pointing out how the issue has been dealt with already, citing an author who considered it by writing a story. I find that quite interesting because I also chose to approach the prompt fictionally. I observed you didn't quite offer any discussion of whether humans are capable of living beyond the earth. Physically speaking, I personally don't think humans are designed for outer space... Well, that's pretty obvious. It would take a huge amount of effort to create a stable environment for people to thrive, and that's assuming you could find a planet that wasn't too close or too far away from a star of similar size to the sun. The odds of finding a planet safe to colonize are such that it seems as if God didn't want us going far afield. I should remember I'm not here to answer the questions but to review your answers. As such, I found the essay easy to read and understand, though perhaps a bit rambling, but no more than I would have if I'd chosen to write an essay  Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/27/2025 @ 4:53pm EDT