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 Silence Open in new Window. [E]
Silence can move a world or quiet an infant.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Cheshire!

This is a splendid poem, overstuffed with grand thoughts and profound imagery. It develops the concept of silence, that lack of audible noise, and explored how noise doesn't always carry as much significance as the simplicity of silence.

The lines are balanced, with matching lengths that lend it the feel of a careful structure without the excess formality of stiff or awkward end rhymes. It flows freely and conversationally, moving between the negative and positive aspects of the power of silence. It also balances nature visuals with the inner thoughts of one's mind, bringing light to different kinds of silence, both internal and external.

I found this to be an impactful and thought-provoking poem, with a lingering reminder to value moments of peace and stillness. I would recommend using Size 4 Verdana font (what I'm using here) to help your words stand strong on the page for a clear and engaging reading experience.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *HeartT*
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