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Happy Birthday ! Open in new Window. [E]
To wish a generous and giving soul on her birthday.
by Just an Ordinary Boo! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am reviewing your poem as part of "Writing.Com in Wonderland" Open in new Window. for WDC's birthday week celebrations.

I felt that your poem had such a warm and friendly sentiment, it is a feel good poem.

For someone's birthday, of course, we want to bring something joyful, pleasing , and celebratory and I think that you achieve that here.

I like the way that the different animals bring their corresponding positive qualities for the person in question's birthday - the wisdom of the elephant, the patience of the tortoise, the charm of the canary and so on.

The poem presents a pleasing image of this animal parade.

I thought the rhyme and flow of the poem works very well, and the repetition of the lines.

I am not sure what the reference to the "garden" girl is - perhaps this is a pet name from the writer to the person.

Happy WDC Birthday week *Smile*

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