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 My Journey  Open in new Window. [E]
I’ve learned that life is fragile.
by ms.aether Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi ms.aether

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought this was a really powerful piece of writing. You did a great job of conveying your experience and thoughts, and then synthesizing that into a message at the end that the reader can take away with them. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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