 Mystery: June 30, 2021 Issue [#10853] |
This week: How not to write a mystery story Edited by: Arakun the twisted raccoon  
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Quote for the week:
Mystery spread its cloak across the sky
We lost our way
Shadows fell from trees
They knew why.
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I recently read one of the worst mystery novels I've ever read in my life. It was written by a well known traditionally published author, and I expected better. I have read much better mystery stories on this site written by members of WDC. I wish I had looked at the negative reviews the story received on Amazon before I subjected myself to it. I won't reveal the author's name or the title of the book, but here are the reasons it has earned the distinction of the worst mystery I have ever read.
The plot was poorly constructed and full of plot holes. All stories benefit from a well planned plot, but it is absolutely essential to a mystery. Mystery readers love to try and figure out the conclusion to a mystery. The writer needs to give them all the information necessary to figure out the conclusion without making it too obvious. Plot twists need to be unexpected, but not unbelievable. This story was full of twists, but even those that were expected were entirely unbelievable, because it was impossible to believe that characters with any intelligence at all would have acted the way these characters did. That leads to the second problem, the characters.
The actions of the two main characters in the story made absolutely no sense at all. Occasionally, even intelligent characters will do things that seem to make no sense, but there has to be a good reason. A reader might suspend disbelief for a few minor unbelievable actions, but the most important actions in this story required not just suspension of disbelief, but total abandonment of it. The author of this story didn't even offer much of an explanation for most of the unbelievable actions the villain and his victim. The characters were also so unlikable that I didn't care what happened to them. The supposedly good characters that the reader was supposed to cheer for weren't much more likable than the villain.
The story was told in bits and pieces, from the perspectives of three different narrators. The timeline also switched back and forth from the past and the present. This format needs to be handled very carefully to be effective. It was often confusing and I had to keep looking back and rereading sections to follow the chain of events. If a story isn't told in linear fashion, make sure the timeline is clear.
I have a hard time believing that the story I'm talking about was edited at all. A good content editor would have pointed out the plot holes and inconsistencies, but sometimes well known authors don't receive the careful editing that a new author might. I will definitely pay more attention to the one and two star reviews on Amazon from now on!
Something to try: Think abut the worst mystery story you have ever read, and try to figure out what might improve it.
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