 Horror/Scary: August 16, 2006 Issue [#1169] |
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Lauren gasped when she rounded the corner into the alley. The object of her revulsion looked up. He was surprised by her sudden appearance. His long hair fell in loose curls past his shoulders. The hair of his bearded chin dripped red with blood. He raised an outstretched hand in front of his face. His other hand let go of the man he had been supporting. The body fell to the pavement.
Her attention darted to the apparent victim and Lauren saw that a stream of blood flowed from the man’s neck. It traced a path between the cracks in the dirty pavement. Lauren looked back to the…well, the vampire. She knew it sounded crazy, but that’s what the guy seemed to be aiming for. Their eyes locked for a few brief moments. His outstretched fingers shook with a nervous energy that she did not mistake for fear. The same wild power pulsed through a cat that was preparing to pounce on some real or perceived prey.
Excerpt from “Lianna’s Children by Chris Dauten.
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There are some excellent horror writers who feature supernatural beings, such as werewolves, demons and vampires in their stories. The excerpt I’ve used to open this newsletter describes a vampire doing what vampires do  , in full view of the heroine! Chris Dauten has brought this being into an every day situation, using the heroine’s feeling about what she’s seen to add visualisation to the reader. Anne Rice’s books also place her vampires in everyday situations, and she gives each character very human emotions – so human that you might want to look at your neighbour a bit more carefully when you close the book! However, I don’t want to focus on supernatural characters in this newsletter. Following last month’s newsletter I hope this one will give you some ideas for creating realistic characters to populate your horror story.
Good fiction is, by definition, credible. A lie that is easily believed. And the most important part of fiction is the characters you create to tell your story. A good horror story character is a fictional being every bit as alive and as much a unique individual as anyone with whom we are acquainted. Your readers should care about him – or her - otherwise they won’t care about what the character does or what happens to him during the story. It doesn’t matter whether they like, love, hate or fear him. Readers must never fell indifferent towards any character otherwise they will lose interest in the story and not bother to finish reading it. The uncle who gets drunk and melancholy at a wedding or your high school history teacher who spent most of the lessons reminiscing about growing up in Europe before the second world war; the individual who personified your first encounter with “puppy-love” or the perhaps the one you dated during your college years... every one of these is a real life living, breathing person. And all are absolutely perfect for any horror story.
Your story must be inhabited by characters your readers know and understand. So that means you – their creator – should know those characters well. And there’s no reason you shouldn’t, because apart from creating them you are also their closest confidant. There is nothing your characters can hide from you. You created them, so you know everything about them, including information they’ve kept hidden from themselves. In crafting a story about them you’ve made yourself their closest friend – a psychiatrist of sorts.
Your characters must have their own unique and distinct traits, just as you the writer/reader are a unique personality. We agree that believable fiction is based on reality, so do not fill your story with stereotypical characters. Stereotypes aren’t allowed to have specific personalities and character traits – their emotions, thoughts and actions are limited by the extremely restrictive mould their role has created for them. Think of some of the real life stereotypes you know; does your truck driver friend behave like a typical “Truck Driver Dude”? Do all drunks go home and beat up their spouses and kids? Are you – the writer – a typical example of a writer? I doubt it. Think about what makes you different and unique from other writers and other people. You know how you feel when someone you counted on lets you down, so it stands to reason you’ll know what your story character feels or think when he experiences the same thing. You have experienced sadness, happiness, fear, frustration, terror and rage so you can create credible characters that experience sadness, happiness, fear, frustration, terror and rage. You've been embarrassed, you've felt pride, you have felt everything a human being can feel. So your characters will come to life in your reader’s mind, animated by your knowledge of yourself, your friends and family and other people. Put them into a credible, believable situation and let them live your story for you!
Readers don’t need to know every single detail of your character’s life. They’re not interested in the name of his first pet or whether he eats peanut butter or not. Neither are they concerned about the name of his favourite singer or the make and model of his first car. But YOU – his creator – need to know these facts in order to create a character to whom your readers can relate. Jessica Amanda Salmonson’s short story {b”And of Gideon” features the title character as a murderous psychopath. Salmonson explains:
”I wanted my readers to fear Gideon, to realize anew that such human aberrations do exist. I wanted my readers to pity him as well, this loser who'd been "programmed for pathology." But more than that, I wanted readers to see Gideon as a credible human being, one who would elicit the wide range of emotional response that only real people can evoke. Here is some of what I knew about Gideon and what I wanted readers to know:
“...my father was a drunk, had no love for my mother, another drunk, she none for him, and neither for me. (From) my early years, I cannot recall a single hug ... My father would beat me, not with the flat of his hand or a belt but with his fists. In kindergarten, I could not colour within the lines, could not catch a basketball thrown to me from a distance of two feet, nor hang by my knees from the monkey bars ... I was always in trouble: for not coming to school on time, for not even trying on tests, for not doing this, for not doing that, always in trouble with the teachers, those despairing head-shakers: ‘Gideon, don't you want to learn? Don't you want to amount to anything? Don't you want to grow up and be somebody?””
This brings me to a final, important point – the stereotype. There are a few stereotypes in modern horror writing that have been written about with great success, but subsequent facsimiles of the stories have never worked as well. Unless you have a unique take or situation on one or more of the following treat these three stereotypes very carefully:
 The shy, plain, quiet girl with a paranormal gift. Stephen King’s ”Carrie”, a disturbing and brilliant character, has been copied many times – but never as successfully as the original.
The twins, usually identical and similar in every behavioural characteristic bar one… again this was detailed very descriptively in Bari Wood’s “Twins”, where both identical male siblings work as gynaecologists and share identical traits and patients. However when the shy twin (who usually picks up the conquests his more confident brother no longer wants) falls in love with a patient before his brother does the pair are forced to make a terrible decision.
The priest suffering doubt about his faith who is forced to confront his doubts in the face of terrible evil. William Peter Blatty’s ”The Exorcist” was the prototype of this character, and the book resulted in the production of one of the most terrifying films ever made. Yet the sequels, particularly 2004’s “Exorcist:The Beginning”, failed to reach the heights of horror of the original.
Use these three stereotypes at your peril:
The preacher who, despite his limited knowledge and understanding of the Bible, speaks in tongues and holds incredible power over his followers.
The helpless businesswoman who, despite controlling a business worth billions of dollars, is incapable of dealing with a supernatural curse or menace.
The handsome, reserved hero who saves the helpless businesswoman before falling in love with her and retiring from his security company/the police force to live with her on her yacht…
Remember - your character should seize your reader and pull him or her into the book, to live the adventure you create with your horror story.
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These three stories are linked, and should be read in order. When his wife disappears Richard learns that all is not as it seems to be, and that truth really is sometimes stranger than fiction.
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This is a school with a difference, where traditional teachers are no longer necessary, replaced by a form of modern technology more ruthless than any human being.
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It doesn’t matter that they’re Roman soldiers equipped to fight any battle – in this story the soldiers are forced to face a supernatural enemy they do not know how to fight.
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It’s only thanks to her online friend that this woman’s suspicions about her husband are confirmed. You make look at your spouse’s habits in a new light after reading this story!
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The character “Bree” from “Desperate Housewives” has nothing on this wife! Nothing stands in her way, and she will deal with anything and anyone who ruffles her perfect world.
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👼intuey 
Great NL! You provided a lot of important information in writing/telling a story. I also look forward to trying my hand at the activity you provided.
I’m glad you found the newsletter useful, 👼intuey . I always find horror stories about everyday lives and events to be the most terrifying of all – don’t you?
Tom Calistan 
Jaws IS scary. I am actually still afraid of the water even in swimming pools. Thanks for the article about turning what's normal into something totally the opposite. I think Stephen King uses this in his works. A lot. 
I confess to being a bit scared of water too, Tom Calistan . However I don’t like water that is dark and murky. If I can’t see what’s in that water I won’t put a toe or finger in it!
mikepyro
The Wicker Man is a brilliant work of bizzare horror, child's play is nothing compared to it.
”The Wicker Man” has been remade with Nicholas Cage in the lead role. I don’t think I’ve ever seen the original, mikepyro, but the reviews make it sound terrifying. The most horrifying thing about “Child’s Play” is the idea that it may have inspired the 1993 murder of two year old Jamie Bulger in England.
schipperke
Wonderful newsletter and the selections for your picks of the week are great. I agree with your choice of horrific reading; Jaws and The Exorcist are creepy reads. When I read the Exorcist for the first time, I wouldn't stay in the room under the attic at my mother's house for fear of hearing the rappings!
Those strange rapping noises aren’t just confined to the attic, schipperke. They could be anywhere in the house… or at work… Seriously though, both those books are really terrifying to read. Even today I am too scared to open either of them.
Nighala a.k.a. Doxie Do-Right
Great Newsletter on how frightening the normal can be and how useful to a horror writer. I think another good example of how normality was used well is the short story The Monkey's Paw, it uses the normal on the multiple levels with the fantastical only coming in to twist reality ever so slightly. It still gives me chills when I think about it.
Great NL, thank you so much.
What a great reference, Nighala a.k.a. Doxie Do-Right ! I’d forgotten about this story, written by WW Jacobs in 1902! It’s a classic, and has served as inspiration for writers like Stephen King. It’s also influences episodes of modern cultural shows, like The Simpsons, Buffy The Vampire Slayer, South Park and The X Files.
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