Comedy: August 16, 2023 Issue [#12125]
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 This week: Brevity
  Edited by: Robert Waltz Author IconMail Icon
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3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
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About This Newsletter

Therefore, since brevity is the soul of wit,
And tediousness the limbs and outward flourishes,
I will be brief: your noble son is mad...

         —William Shakespeare (Hamlet, Act 2, Scene 2)

Brevity is a great charm of eloquence.
         —Marcus Tullius Cicero

Through an arbitrary problem, I had arrived at a tenet of good writing: brevity wins.
         —Michael Winter


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Letter from the editor

Brevity may be the soul of wit, but I have a minimum word count to meet.

Shakespeare, who famously penned the line, wasn't speaking of humor, though. Its source, Hamlet, isn't widely known for its comedic antics, unless you find crazy people talking to skulls, ghosts, and imaginary audiences inherently amusing. No, the word "wit" would have been known to represent the wider meaning of intelligence or mental quickness.

Which, of course, heretofore and to-wit, is a prerequisite for deliberate comedy. But it's not always sufficient. Often, you need to set up a joke, and that takes time. It's still, usually, a good idea to do the setup as efficiently as possible, especially when someone knows that some sort of punchline is coming.

The punchline itself, naturally, needs to be concise, elegant, and brief.

One place where brevity shines in comedy is on a bumper sticker. It's important to use the fewest words possible to convey the joke, lest the people behind you swerve off the road or slam into your rear end in their attempt to read the whole thing. This also applies to the internet version of the bumper sticker, the picture meme. In that case, it's our short attention spans you have to cater to.

Brevity, however, relies on shared experience. You don't need a setup because you and the audience have already lived the setup. Which is why it's important to choose your audiences. One of my favorite non-bumper stickers is "Heisenberg may have slept here." Which, nowadays, a great number of people will scratch their heads over, because they'll be trying to fit it into a Breaking Bad reference, when it's actually a joke about quantum physics. (It also riffs on the old tourist sign "George Washington slept here," which, considering where I spent my childhood in northern Virginia, might have actually been true sometimes.)

So, to answer the question "Is brevity truly the soul of wit?" I can only proffer the response: Sometimes.


Editor's Picks

Brief or not, some wit:

 
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Snake Charmer Open in new Window. [E]
A tale of a door snake.
by Teargen Author Icon


 O.U.C.H. Open in new Window. [13+]
A support group for the clumsy and the klutzy. Black and blue for the accident prone!
by SandraLynn Author Icon


 Meeting The Grim Reaper Open in new Window. [E]
A short humorous story about joining my first warship in the Royal Navy
by matelot Author Icon


 Cornered Open in new Window. [E]
Russell sees life from his own perspective. (Flash Fiction)
by Hyperiongate Author Icon


 Shoes and Other Cliches Open in new Window. [E]
Shoes, balls, loafers, and gophers
by Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon


 
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Alien Encounters of the Weird Kind Open in new Window. [13+]
A chat with an alien goes haywire.
by Lornda Author Icon


 A Cat with Issues, Can You Tell? Open in new Window. [E]
My friend's cat finds out what curiosity can do to him.
by angelique54 Author Icon


 
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Castle Cross Stitch Open in new Window. [E]
A tale of seamstress Guinevere.
by Jatog the Green Author Icon

 
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Ask & Answer

Last time, in "That's WeirdOpen in new Window., I discussed some of the oddities of English.


s Author Icon: I love Mark Twain's ghoti. The gh as in cough, o as in women and ti as in nation... so ghoti is "fish".

         We can only sit at the feet of the Master while also standing upon his shoulders.


NaNoNette Author Icon: Pronunciation: it's all just poh-tay-toe poh-tuh-tow.

         Sometimes, it's Quayle eggs.


So that's it for me for August! See you next month. Until then,

LAUGH ON!!!



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