Short Stories: April 17, 2024 Issue [#12513] |
This week: All About Capitalization Edited by: Lilith🎄🦌Christmas Cheer More Newsletters By This Editor
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Let’s eat kids. Let’s eat, kids. Punctuation saves lives!
No more coffee! No, more coffee! (Punctuation matters.)
Apostrophes can be so possessive.
I wish correcting the grammar on public signs wasn’t considered vandalism.
Tense? Moody? Irregular? You must be a verb.
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I know, I know! Grammar and punctuation can be a pain in the derriere, I know. However, as writers, it's one of those topics that we need to discuss. Rather than bore you to death with a bajillion examples, I'll address a few common errors I see around WdC.
General, Nobility, and Military Titles
General Titles
When general titles are used before names, they are capitalized, unless a comma follows, in which case they remain lowercase. Titles are NOT capitalized if they come after a name or if they’re used in place of a name.
Example a: The president* is speaking later today.
Example b: The inauguration of President Obama took place on January 20, 2009.
Example c: The president, Barack Obama, was inaugurated on January 20.
*Note: Some writers choose to capitalize titles for those people high in government ranking out of respect, but this style is going by the wayside. Most modern style guides are in favor of lowercase, with the only exception being Speaker, as in Speaker of the House.
Example a: The treasurer of the class, Katie Smith, raised her hand.
Example b: Treasurer Katie Smith took her place.
However, be aware that official titles are not the same thing as occupations. Occupations should not be capitalized before a full name.
teacher John Smith
author Edgar Allan Poe
actress Sandra Bullock
Note: Sometimes style guides express different opinions. The occupations of professor and manager, for example, are sometimes accepted as titles rather than occupations. However, as a whole, most style guides are in favor of keeping things lowercase, including The Chicago Manual of Style.
Nobility Titles
With medieval terms, many people mistakenly believe that words such as sir, my lady (alternative milady), my lord (alternative milord), and several other similar titles should always capitalized. However, as with the other titles listed, they are only capitalized when used with a name.
Example a: King George depended on his loyal subjects.
Example b: The king’s favorite food was chocolate-covered strawberries.
Example a: Have you seen Sir Lancelot?
Example b: Have you seen him, my good sir?
When a specific location is used with the generic elements (king, queen, prince, duke, duchess, etc.), it permanently extends the generic element as part of the person’s name.
Example: He received a letter from the Prince of Wales.
Military Titles
As with general titles, when used in formal or academic prose, military titles are only capitalized when they precede a person’s name.
Example a: General Michael Smith was recently promoted.
Example b: Michael Smith, the general of the unit, was recently promoted.
Books and Other Works
As a general rule, for titles of books, magazines, journals, websites, short stories, and many other types of publications, the standard method is to capitalize the first and last words and all other major words. This includes nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjective, adverbs, and some conjunctions (except and, but, for, or, and nor).
The articles a, an, and the are always lowercase. Prepositions are also lowercase, regardless of length, unless they are used adverbially or adjectivally (Fess Up, Step Down, Off Switch, Come To).
A couple of other things:
Part of proper names that are lowercase in text, such as de or von, should remain as lowercase in a title.
The second part of a species name is always lowercase, even if it’s the last word in a title.
Seasons and Time of Day
Unless used as part of the issue title of a journal or magazine, one should write the four seasons in lowercase.
Example a: December marks the start of winter.
Example b: The Winter 2015 issue has been published.
Unless we use periods to punctuate them, we capitalize abbreviations for the time of day.
Example a: He left at 6:41 p.m.
Example b: He left at 6:41 PM.
Deities and Concepts
It is necessary to capitalize the names of any deity, whether part of monotheistic or polytheistic religions. Religious events also follow suit (the Creation, the Exodus, the Second Coming).
Terms for divine dwelling places, divine places of punishment, and other such concepts (heaven, hell, limbo, nirvana) are usually lowercase. However, individuals frequently capitalize them when used exclusively in a religious context.
As mentioned at the beginning of this newsletter, these are a few of the main problematic areas of capitalization that I’ve come across. But if you’re looking for an extensive resource on this topic, The Chicago Manual of Style has a hefty section dedicated to it. You can also find most of the answers to the common questions they receive in the forums on their website, part of which you can view for free if you Google “CMOS” plus the topic at hand.
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Thank you for these responses to my last Short Stories newsletter, "Character Mapping"
markmore wrote:
First, great NL. It is so far to between times when I put words down on paper that they end up pouring out in a deluge of 2 or 3 thousand words at a time. So I make notes on the back side of the page for a quick reference. it will eventually make its way to a character sheet. this method helps me keep track where in the story each character is introduced.
🐕GeminiGem🎁 wrote:
I've never done character mapping, you know, hardcore pantser here. I have one series of over 20 short stories I written over the last decade that had a large cast of secondary characters I like to bring forth now and again. As time goes on, I find I have to go back and research my own writing to get it right. I should probably start keeping track, but shhhhhh...don't tell anyone or I'll be kicked out of the International Pantsers Association.
Your secret is safe with me!
Damon Nomad wrote:
Good newsletter Lilli, keeping track of characters is critically important for many reasons. I usually have one sheet of paper with characters grouped together based on some key connection. Short descriptions of each written below their name. I also like pictures os actors or drawings to give the. each some physical traits. When I review the dialog I try and make sure they have a voice that matches their traits.
That's great! Well done!
Merry_Mikey wrote:
You're right, those character charts can be pretty overwhelming, but I like the reasonably short list you provided - thanks! Also, thank you for including my story, "She Never Wore Green", in your Editor's Picks section. Great NL!
Thank you, Mike!
brom21 wrote:
I miss so many things in my writing. lol. As of a few weeks ago, I committed to going over my manuscripts at least five times. The first story I did that with, I found three or four big inconsistencies. Editing is essential. And, as the saying goes, we sometimes must kill our darlings. lol. Thanks for the NL!
Indeed, editing is crucial!
Beholden wrote:
Thank you again for including one of mine in your Editor's Picks section. This time it's Fugitive, a current favourite of mine in the Steampunk genre.
As regards mapping characters, I can't see me ever being organised enough to do that. I tend to know them in my head (no, not real people although I guess there are aspects of people I've known included in their make-up) and I ask them about their preferences when I need to know. I suppose that could be dangerous if you're writing something as long as a book, but in a short story you should get away with it.
I'll let you know if I ever get caught out. ;)
I agree that short stories are easier to remember details than full-length novel! At least for the time being, lol. |
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