 Action/Adventure: May 01, 2013 Issue [#5646] |
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This week: Suspense Adds to Action Edited by: Leger~  
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Suspense Adds to Action
I was discussing a movie this weekend and we were in agreement about a couple scenes where the editing (assuming for time) cut the suspenseful timing and failed to make the action as exciting. When writing, take time to consider your characters and timing when creating suspense. Is your character unwilling to act because he has a flaw? Is your character too weak to create a great action scene? Does your antagonist grow in strength with every victory?
Make sure your antagonist is human enough to show his motivation and why he thinks the bad things he does are okay. Does your antagonist have supporters that spur on his bad behavior? Use them to build up your antagonist / protagonist's action and give your climaxes the punch they need. It's also helpful to have a few 'spare' characters that can become helpful or cause unpredictable outcomes. Even a little sexual tension can move your plot forward. Disagreements or failure to obey orders can create tension and chaos.
Pressure on a character can create suspense. You know, scenes like the timer on a bomb slowly counting down, the sun rising on a vampire, or an escape route cut off. While you don't want to 'write your character into a corner', you can do so temporarily and then help them solve the problem. Inner conflict can be suspenseful if the reader is aware of the character's back history and can understand their hesitation or unusual reaction to conflict. Timing can be crucial.
Write on!
This month's question: What type of suspense do you think adds to action and climaxes? |
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This month's question: What type of suspense do you think adds to action and climaxes?
Last month's question: What is your favorite water adventure?
dogwalker  replied: I certainly got something to think about. My most memorable water adventure was when I was working on an ore carrier on the Great Lakes! Never before and never again did i ever get seasick. it was lifetimes ago, and one I'll never forget. Now - hmm - I have some sprucing to do with "The Voyage of the Water Stride" But that's a different world where boats rafts & canoes are as common as cars are here. with the usual inter-dimensional gate of course.
jdstephens answered: I'll say '20,000 Leagues Under the Sea',though at least partially because it's the only water-focused adventure I've read.
A*Monaing*Faith  sent: Awesome topic, can't think of water adventures off top of my head...except maybe Captain Ron and Wkend at Bernie's, both movies. But I simply adore water and the ocean, maybe cuz I'm a Cancer but probably because it is sooo soothing. ....o yea and POTCari, but that's so cliche at this point.
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