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But, I Don't WANT to Write an Outline!
Outlines are time consuming, but when writing a longer story, they are very valuable.
Outlines being valuable is actually a bit of an understatement when it comes to Action and Adventure stories.
Let's face it, this genre is full of twists, turns, deceptions, surprises, prophecies, and if we aren't careful, story inconsistencies. There are so many characters, subplots, and actions to keep track of, it can be incredibly hard to keep track of everything to be sure that continuity is there, as it should be. Outlines can help.
Now, I am very aware that outlines are not an author's favorite thing, most of the time. We want to write, not outline. And in some cases, outlines would be unnecessary and, honestly, a waste of time. If you are writing flash fiction of 300 words, you shouldn't write an outline. Your outline would likely be longer than your story!
However, if you are writing something lengthy where there are multiple things to keep track of, an outline is an amazing way to both organize your thoughts before fully writing, and keep track of everything so details do not get lost.
Outlines can be in many formats. For the purposes of writing, this is what I suggest:
Chapter 1 - Name
1) Chapter detail
Reasons for detail, why detail is present, when detail might come into play.
2) Chapter detail
Reasons for detail, why detail is present, when detail might come into play.
(use as many chapter details as needed)
3) Sequence of events
First thing that happens
Second thing that happens
Third thing that happens
Fourth thing that happens
Fifth thing that happens
And so on until everything has happened
4) Chapter
(If combining the outline with the work in progress, the actual chapter words would go here. If not combining them, they would go in a different document.)
~Repeat for each chapter
Here, I'll give you an example using one of my own items:
Chapter 1
1) Do NOT forget to explain what in the world is going on.
Describe the "sport" used to keep the military men fit in the time of peace - accusing a woman of something random, and then setting her free to run while they chase her.
2) Hooded figure introduced, but not named.
This chapter, he is simply a cloaked figure who hovers over what is going on. His emblem is shown (silver dragon), but he is only seen as someone speaking to the officer in charge.
3) Three scenes
Man and woman talking
Brief cut to soldiers
Into Anista's head during chase
4) Sequence of events
Shouting for guards heard around city
Conversation between man and woman about despicable sport
Woman leaves to find the other, who is running
Cut scene to soldiers, orders to find woman
Hooded figure steps forward, speaks to officer, officer relays that woman is to be captured ALIVE.
Cut to Anista, running
She stops to eavesdrop on soldiers
Sharp pain to her temple, and she passes out
5)Chapter
"Guards!"
The word rang out over the city like a church bell, though the tidings it held were much more grim.
"Guards!"
As each herald took up the call, their voices rose together in the crisp shout, then faded away to be replaced by a fast-paced echo of footsteps.
The doors were shut tightly against the commotion that broke the still of the night, not even the flicker of candlelight could be seen in the windows surrounding the square and side streets. The town lay lifeless.
There was one window, however, with a barely detectable crack, and two sets of eyes squinted out into the street.
"Poor girl," a gruff voice muttered. "How often does this happen?"
"Once a week... sometimes more. It is a despicable sport," the young woman answered, the whisper much more natural coming from her lips. "They accuse a woman of something, then let her run. If she can avoid the guards for an entire night, she's free. If not..."
"Of what? I did not know much was illegal in Maldorn."
"It wasn't the last time you were here, but that was a year ago. Last summer, the king was convinced by the Priest to make all kinds of new laws. When we're supposed to go to market, what clothing we wear, even how long we are allowed to spend....
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I haven't picked up this particular novel/novella in a long time, but I did an outline for it. That means that, no matter when I decide to pick it back up again, I have not forgotten what is supposed to happen. I haven't forgotten the game, I haven't forgotten the characters, I haven't forgotten their relationships, and I haven't forgotten the prophecies. I have it all there for when I have time around being a mother, a wife, a teacher, and a dog-walker.
Outlines are time consuming, yes. But they are WELL WORTH the time.
Notice that they don't have to be incredibly detailed. Just enough to keep you on track, and remind you of things to maintain continuity. |
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The above is the item mentioned in comments. The rest of today's highlights will be outlines. I showed you one way they could be done - this newsletter would hardly be complete without other ideas and outlines to look at.
Each of these is different - not because of the story, but because of the formatting. I found the different ways people approach writing down their ideas rather fascinating, honestly!
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Last month's newsletter ("Action/Adventure Newsletter (May 1, 2013)" ) question asked: What regular life-happening might you use in your next story, and how would you portray it there?
There were some great responses, so I'll gladly put them here for you!
Silverwindrose Dragon Minstrel wrote, "The story I am writing right now in a way is based off my husband getting a new job and the troubles of learning what to to get the job done. I did not realize this till you asked this great question.
Now yes My story is in progress but any and all feed back is helpful for me."
I will put your story in the Editor's Picks above, then! I hope you get plenty of readers that way. Thank you so much for mentioning how you used real life in your stories! I love that!
Quick-Quill wrote, "I wrote about my character's uncle being a hoarder while my MC is the opposite with OCD. I find that this is quite true where one over compensates for the other. Hubby OCD and I tend to be...sentimental and that's all I'm going to say. "
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder can be difficult for the person who has it, and for the families of those who have it. Most, however, are perfectly well functional except for a few eccentricities. Goodness, we all have eccentricities!
I'll be that contrasting story is absolutely amazing! It sounds like it would be very interesting.
monty31802 wrote, "A good newsletter with great points made."
Thank you.
NaNoNette wrote, "Regular life happening" goodness, who has that anymore?
Okay, I am exaggerating. The news this week are making life edgy enough. I'm glad I'm employed, the car didn't break down, and the worst illness we've had to deal with was a bout of food poisoning.
That being said, I really liked your newsletter. Day to day life does pack a punch and small, seemingly innocent things can be jazzed up to be amazing adventures."
Sometimes I wish the things going on in life were just adventures, and I could put the book down and let things get back to normal on a regular basis. Heh. You have a lot of things to be thankful for there, Giselle. Despite everything going on in my own life, I cling to the fact that I still have a loving husband, two adorable and intelligent children, and some darn cute doggies that absolutely love when I get home every day.
Johnny Samuel wrote, "Finding out your Crohns is coming back and spreading fast.
In the book:
Character is slipped a slow acting poison and must solve who did it before it takes full effect and kills him or her.
Character finds out he or she has a superpower, but it comes with dire consequences. (Sorry this does not have spell check for the boxes, and I am a horrible speller. Weird huh? A writer without the ability to spell words properly.)"
Having trouble with spelling is more common than you might think! Besides, writing is about getting ideas out onto that page and having continuity and interest of the reader... the spelling can always be fixed later.
I love how you took something in your life and changed it to your book! It is the perfect example of exactly what I was speaking of in the newsletter. Awesome! Thank you!
This Month's Question: What tool do you use the most to keep everything on track when writing? How do you fill in the gaps or squash inconsistencies?
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