Noticing Newbies: April 16, 2014 Issue [#6268]
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3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter


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Letter from the editor



“I not only use all the brains I have, but all that I can borrow.” -- Woodrow Wilson.


On Writing:

The critique process can seem frightening to someone who has never put their work before an audience before. There are always questions floating through your mind.

*Dialog* What am I hoping to accomplish by allowing others to see what I have written?
*Dialog* What will others think of my writing?
*Dialog* What will I do if I don’t agree with what they say?

There are many reasons that putting your writing out for critique can be helpful. Besides just sharing their personal knowledge or catching a typo here and there, there are several reasons that can be helpful to new and old writers alike.

Often times reviewers can suggest new resources for research as well as new angles, twists or ideas to improve your stories. Remember, you don't have to take every suggestion, but they can often spark new ideas that you may not have thought of. Another nice perk is a good reviewer not only points out what can be improved but what is already working in your stories or poems. Hearing comments on what you're doing right in your work can give you an instant ego boost and will motivate you to keep writing. Motivation is important when you hit a dry spell while writing a story or novel.

On Reviewing:

The most common complaint I hear is - I'm not sure what to say. I don't feel qualified to correct their grammar. What most people don't understand is reviews are always about finding what's wrong. After you read a story or poem, there is nothing wrong with sharing what you liked about it without any critique. If you know something is wrong, that's fine to point it out. However, it's not a deal-breaker if you don't. The most important thing you can do for the author is just be honest.

While pointing out typos and offering suggestions is fine, the overall impression should reflect your understanding of what the author is trying to do and how well they accomplished it. Keep in mind when writing a review, explaining what works and what didn't in a story will actually help you recognize what works and what doesn't within your own writing.

This is a great article I came across from Gunn Center for the Study of Science Fiction called "How to be a Good Critiquer and Still Remain Friends"  Open in new Window. that may help you understand and become a better reviewer.

Write and Review on! ~ Brooke

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Editor's Picks




 Meet My Alphabet Family Open in new Window. [E]
A children's book to help the reader learn his ABC's.
by N. M. Barnes Author Icon

Excerpt:
This is my cousin K.
She loves to play with kittens. Someday she wants to live in a kingdom with a handsome king.

This is my uncle L.
He takes care of the lawn. He pushes a large lawn mower while he drinks lemonade, and he rakes up leaves.

This is my mommy M.
She owns a miniature monkey. She makes marvelous muffins that she feeds to her monkey, and she drinks milkshakes.

~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
It was in my first summer spent in China that I realized meat wouldn't be reentering my life. I had considered becoming a vegetarian before but the disapproval of my family is what stopped me. I could not become one of those sick, pale girls who look like they were about to pass out. For most of my life I was a junk food girl, shoving down fast food hoping that if I was fast enough I might not be able to taste it. It seemed sort of like a challenge, eating as much crap as I could just to prove to others that yes, I do have a freakishly fast metabolism. I never questioned where the food came from, as long as it appeared on my plate that was fine with me.

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 Sacrifice for a Stranger Open in new Window. [ASR]
The strength to save someone elses life over your own.
by Chels Author Icon

Excerpt:
Victoria Stone kept fidgeting as she tried to get comfortable in those modern metal seats these airport terminals now have. Her new stepsister Eve Shrowder and her were waiting for their plane to arrive, witch was now two hours delayed. The New York LaGuardia airport smelled like stale coffee, carpet and junk food all mixed together in a interesting but unpleasant odor. Sitting in terminal C2 with a person you have no interest in being with isn't Victoria's idea of fun. She would rather be at her dorm putting her photography portfolio together than being in this brutal situation.

~*Star*~

 My First Beer Open in new Window. [13+]
How my dad and I shared our first beer together.
by John Nation Author Icon

Excerpt:
Tanya let her eyes roam the overhead sky as she stretched in preparation for her run. Slightly grey and hazy, a firm breeze whipping around her body; a storm was definitely on the way. She set off at an easy jog. Out here, in the open air, it was just her and the road. No complications, no histrionics, no hesitancy--just one foot pounding the pavement in front of the other. Tanya increased her pace, letting the repetitive thunder of striking feet wash over her charged nerves in a soothing flood. Life was hard, but this--this was easy.

~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
I’ve lived in Sourcestone my entire life. I’ve visited, conversed, and argued with most of its three hundred occupants, at one time or another; over the past 16 years. I’ve also noticed the disappearance of numerous young girls.

“They ran away.” Dad assured me, along with all the elders.

So I let it go, even though it didn’t make sense. Why only 16 year old girls, and never boys? But even stranger…how is it, a new 18 year old boy shows up, shortly after a girl goes missing?

~*Star*~

 Shelter Me Chapter 1 Open in new Window. [13+]
A young woman seeks employment at the local child welfare shelter.
by Debecker Author Icon

Excerpt:
How quickly can one human life unravel? In my experience it had taken fully around nine months and three weeks. Roughly the gestation period for a human being, funnily enough. I sat in an over brightly lit room full of hard plastic chairs, industrial gray, lest they lend either color or spark to the utilitarian room. Kafka-esque my literature professor would have said.

I sighed deeply and shut my eyes.

I needed this job.

~*Star*~

 A Night on the River of Styx Open in new Window. [E]
I love Greek mythology and found the River of Styx to be fascinating, here's my own twist.
by JBurtonR Author Icon

Excerpt:
I am the oarsman on the River of Styx, it has been my burden since the dawn of man. For a toll of two coins I take those souls, who have passed, to their final destinations. I have seen all types, I have smelled the swine, and touched the roughest of them, any yet, my work here is not done until the last man pays his toll and takes his ride to the very end.

As the mortal's clocks strike nine, the first of this evening hath arrived. A soul of pure evil is at my gate, to take him now or make him wait?

~*Star*~

 Don't Kill The Cow Too Quick Open in new Window. [13+]
Don't Kill the Cow Too Quick records a passing era.
by wesleybook Author Icon

Excerpt:
Cool water flowed over my shoulders and down the front of my sweat laden shirt. I was sitting in a rock chair sculpted by the passage of a jungle stream. Beyond the sound of the falling water, silence extended indefinitely. On either side dense foliage formed an impenetrable barrier.

I breathed deeply, filling my lungs with virgin air unsoiled by man. The sun's rays filtered through the canopy, creating stencils of light on leaves the shape of elephant ears.

~*Star*~

 Invalid Item Open in new Window. []

by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
It was discovered to be no joke.

April was really dead. Mae shook her head sorrowfully as she stared at what she now realized was her sister's body. The smell of gun powder still lingered in the air and the shot seemed to echo all around her. How could April have been so stupid? She knew Mae was on constant alert since her stalker, Fiona Grace, had been released from the psyche ward earlier that month.

Had it really been her sister that sabotaged her car causing it to stall on this back road? Had she really been the one to follow her around all week?


~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
John passed through the white bricked hallway and turned a sudden right into the open doorway, the sudden turn and attempt of lining his shoulders and body perfectly in the middle of the doorway was a mini challenge of his that he did for his own amusement, of his drawing/cartoon class. His teacher, Mr. Apollo, was a retired "imagineer" or something for Disney, or whatever they call the people who draw stuff for Disney, so he was able to convince the school to allow him to teach a cartoonist class; which in John's opinion was awesome. Mr. Apollo was an older, short man. He had a long white beard that hid his usual smile he had. Often he wore clean, solid colored, lose fitting button-ups and relaxed khakis. Although, he was permanently slightly bent from old age, his voice reeked of youthfulness.

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Ask & Answer


I received some wonderful feedback to my last newsletter [#6218] "The Magic of Writing.comOpen in new Window. and I'm proud to share it with you.

From PatrickB Author Icon
Wonderful essay, Brooke! I couldn't agree more about the community! *Smile*

Thank you Patrick! *Smile*

From An apple a day.... Author Icon
So glad you are better, Brooke! And, yes, WDC is the best!

I'm working on it. This bronchitis just doesn't seem to want to leave *Pthb* And I agree!

From aegreenfield
This site is great. I want to interact more.

It's the best way to grow and learn! Thanks for writing in.

From The Run-on King PDG Member Author Icon
Wow great to see you being active again. I remember my first newbie newsletter. I was just starting to review so I used all the story listings and reviewed them all. Took me a day or two to finish that little project. The out come from it was I got noticed by Patrick with the Art of Criticism project. I made a great friend in the land down under. I was assigned a mentor and even Sisco said hi and pushed me to do more reviewing.

That's a perfect testament to what I was saying. Our community is the greatest! *Bigsmile* Thanks for sharing your experience.

From Quick-Quill Author Icon
I think the post on the newsfeed to Read a Newbie has been a boost. I may be busy editing but when I see that, I stop to read and review a couple. I have made friends with some of the new writers and that makes this community what it is. A place to grow as a writer, experience life outside of your state and country. I can tell most writer to have "whilst" in their story are from England.

That's great to hear. I think the newsfeed has been an amazing addition to the site and really contributes to more interaction between members. *Thumbsup* Thanks for writing in!

From THANKFUL SONALI Library Class! Author Icon
You are so right! I love my online family on Writing Dot Com. I treasure all the friendships. I have even met some members in person - Just an Ordinary Boo! Author Icon, VikramAdith Author Icon, Ragster Go11 Author Icon, Acme Author Icon and Alan Philps Author Icon!

You are an amazing part of this community! Thank you for sharing your friends with us. *Bigsmile*


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