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I forgot to mention, you've created a spoiler in the description
So maybe use a line from the story to tease rather than give it away.

David is shaken by the passing of a loved one,
“Is this it? Life just ends?”
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
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Dialogue only, a woman receives a phonecall from the other side.


Thanks to a review, the nouns are far more consistent. :)
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