Kyle Peterson's Notebook

NaNoNette

Apr 7, 2024 at 1:00am

Happy Account Anniversary

Apr 20, 2015 at 1:55pm

Added some things to my second book in the series. Also, I decided to either delete chapters or combine some and that's why the chapter numbers are weird right now. I will fix that as soon as I can. I also know that there are a lot of spelling errors and probably more in this book right now, I just don't have the time to edit it yet. As soon as I can, I'll edit this book and continue to add more to the story.

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Apr 10, 2015 at 9:29pm

Just did a fair amount of revision and editing on my book. There will be more revisions to come to make it longer and more eventful and emotional. Take a read and review in the best and most honest way you can. The harsher the critique the better.

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Apr 10, 2015 at 4:12pm

Revisions of the story has just been completed. I am going to do another read through to see if there are any edits I can make.

The Dragon of Legend

(18+)
A dragon stronger than the rest, only told in legends. That legend has now come to life.

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Smee

Apr 10, 2015 at 4:14pm

Is this your book version? If I have time, I'll take a look.

Apr 10, 2015 at 8:30pm

Smee, It takes place in the same world as my book, but it's not an actual part of my book. It's a separate short story. And thank you Scruffy.

Apr 7, 2015 at 1:20am

I've just edited and completed an item in my portfolio for a contest coming up. Please read and review, give me the best/worst critiques you can:

The Dragon of Legend

(18+)
A dragon stronger than the rest, only told in legends. That legend has now come to life.

Sep 13, 2014 at 1:51am

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

The Forest of the Dead

(18+)
A minor side story of future characters in the Lighthouse Series.

A side story about future characters in my Lighthouse series. A short story of their travel through the Dark Forest and their encounter with the Dark Lord.

Apr 27, 2014 at 9:04am

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

The Heroes Query Letter

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The Query Letter that I'm going to send to an agent

Oct 22, 2012 at 8:04am

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

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Aug 27, 2012 at 11:06pm

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

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Aug 22, 2012 at 8:36pm

I've added a new item to my portfolio:

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Nacho Cheese

Aug 22, 2012 at 12:48pm

Wow I loved Heroes I and will read the second as well. You're great, man.

Aug 22, 2012 at 6:15pm

Hey, thank you very much. Right now the second book isn't quite done yet, but I'll definitely be working on it to try and keep it up to date for you

Jun 19, 2012 at 8:57pm

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

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jim1184

Apr 15, 2012 at 12:47am

I am reading heroes 1, It has been great so far , but i am going to print it out so I don't have to keep going back and forth and can enjoy it all the way through. I am starting to get characters confused.

Singular Scribbler

Jul 31, 2010 at 10:41pm

Hello there! So, I saw that you just joined the League of Young Writers. Me too! So I decided to check out your profile/portfolio/bio thing and I happened to discover two fantastic things. 1)You are also 18. *high fives* and 2) You like Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children which means...+20 COOL. Allocate as you wish.

Yes, now that I have infected your profile with my little bit of not-that-random...ness, I shall away!