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Review of Soulmate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
hello writebeforedawn !
as someone that has the same deep connection to the ocean, i love how you portrayed the inviting, warm and protective nature of the ocean.
With its waves steady and calm, its breeze soft and clean, its sound hushed, repetitive and soothing.
Well done on your clear expression of a feeling i miss so much !
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Review of The last train  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
hey angel,

I found this story incredibly relatable and poignant in its description of eleanor's feelings, i absolutely enjoyed it!

The only thing i can suggest is the transition and pace of your story, i would have loved a more descriptive tone to it, but i am no expert, i speak only from a reader's point of view.
keep up the good work! you have got great potential.
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