This poem is beautifully written. The love was so strong that the joy in the memories goes on. I really appreciate how you relate the love to music in stanzas three and four mentioning songs and lyrics as music is so powerful, expressive, full of feelings, and enchanting so that was a great description to have read. All and all a great poem in the memory of a great loss to honor and remember.
Very nice poem, it sounds like you’ve been through a lot if this is about yourself. I really liked The choice of words and flow. I love poetry that is about life and kind of raw, it really makes a piece when there’s a good amount of emotion.
Very well written poem to describe the difficulty of anxiety, it’s definitely not an easy thing to deal with and very hard for people who don’t ever have it to understand it. I felt like I could really relate to this piece, it’s a lot when you feel too much.
Very nice, I loved reading this piece. There is so much passion here and the flow is fantastic! This is my favorite type of poetry to read when you can clearly feel the love in it.
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