Um, can you like reply to me telling me the entire meaning of this? I'll rate it good only because I'm sure someone more coherent than me would do the same.
Okay, I like the poem. But, instead of the genre being Dark, lol, it should be physotic. :) But, yeah, really, you described the illusions perfectly. Write on!
I like the message the poem displays and I can tell you're religious, so between you and me, I'll ask a question that's been bothering me lately. How do you know there is a God?
Well, very heartfelt I should say. And I take it you're religious! I like the poem. I don't like when people tell me to fix something of mine, but shouldn't it be like a dash instead of a comma? Like, "Thru darkest of months - to darkest of years- I pray? I'm asking you this, should it be your way or mine, or is it merely how you like to write your poetry?
Okay, so I sorta liked the story. Though I got lost in the midst of it. I don't get why it's named Bumble Boy still. I know you explained it, but it's just me and I don't understand. I don't know how frequently you're on here, but next time you are, can you explain the story to me instead of me reading it again, because I hate not knowing what I'm reading.
I love it, it shows the truth and everything. I think this poem actually brought tears to my eyes. I loved the part, "I am now happy" it's wonderful! I think I wrote something somewhat similar called, "Angel." Keep on writing! I'll be sure to read more of your work, though you may not like opinions from someone who is fourteen..
Okay, I just read this, yet again, but I can't find out one simple thing, and that is why does it drain so much of Zek's energy when he uses magic? That I don't understand. Anywho, I'm sure you've talked to a girl named Valerie on here. Her email is valerie47@writing.com. She posted little clips of a few stories we're both working on on this site. Can you like go over a few of them? I think she may have them marked as private, but if not, can you check some out?
I love this story. It's funny! Yet it's sad as well. And the fact that you let all of the chickens die was mean. And I'm not criticizing it, but what's the point because I'm a bit slow and not sure of the point. But still, I'd say all of those chickens were traders and talked about each other behind one-another's back.
OMG! This was such a good story. I mean, usually cultural and lovey-dovey stories don't interest me. But this is quite good. I like the mixed race towards the end. Then there was how the woman liked the man and he just didn't see it until the end. I would recommend you listen to the song "All At Once" by The Fray!
Hey Alexis! This was pretty good. And though you're new, (like myself) - she says under her breath- it's still great! I have had one of those day, plenty in fact. You're a great writer, though. Not like I'm a professional, but yeah, I still think it's good. I like rain! Write on!
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