A very good read. Very unexpected. I really can't say what I expected, but it was not what I read. I really enjoy such surprises. It is very well written and it gives me the feeling to look into something I will only find out, when I'm not able to tell anyone.
Go on with the good writing.
anna
Applause!
That was a fun and good read.
I enjoyed it a lot to go to that irish tale word by word and I tend to believe it might be true.
I´ve to admit, that I´m a bit fan of irish tales and so this short story had my fully attention from beginning to end.
Keep up the good work
It is really awful what happen in the world.
Terrorism is really a war no one can win.
I miss a bit of anger and exasperation in this poem.
Yes, it is true, that everybody has a different way to deal with a situation like this, and maybe it is the palsy of the world, that make the words in this poem not powerful enough.
It is a good solid work and maybe it is only me, missing something here
What a nice description of coming home.
I can feel the deep connectivity and the heart and soul you feel for the place you were born.
I like the repeats of the beginning in the end. That makes the picture complete.
It began when you were born and now it is complete. And the impression of the picture never changed.
Well done.
Keep on writing.
Eyes and soul are always a main theme in my life.
I trust the mirror to the soul, but I know, the blind people can use their body instead of their eyes.
You put it well and in a very interesting way.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work.
This is a perfect place for every writer.
It makes me very proud to be part of it and so I just can say, that it is worth more than 5.0 stars.
A double 5.0 comes closer to the truth.
The Storymistrees and the Storymaster are doing a fantastic job here. Just needed to say that
Very good read and I bet many of us can relate to it. Well, I can.
I always felt like I was a nothing and unimportant until I met that person who made me feel that that, what I am is the best thing, that happened to me.
Sometimes it is still hard to believe, but I think, my little poem "In your eyes" says exactly the same. ( I don´t link it here, as I don´t want to make a shameless self promotion here).
But, be sure, I know exactly, what are you talking about here.
And, you put it in a great way.
So, keep up the good work and keep on writing.
This is a really sweet poem.
I can feel the love you both share with each other.
Love can be true.
Love can be lived.
You just have to trust each other enough.
And that is, what I read in this poem.
That you love and care for each other.
What a big present in life you both have.
Congrats.
Keep up the good work.
RAOK is a wonderful community in the writing.com community who is helping so many members already, that it is just a good thing to join the brigade.
Thanks, that this group does exist.
A nice and funny little poem.
I just can see that little rabbit hopping around and find out what´s going on in the world.
You put it in a nicely and funny way, just like bunnies are. Sweet and curious and hard to restrain. So full of searching for the fun adventures.
Liked it.
Keep up the good work... anna
Donnie can be a very proud person now. Fingers crossed that you will get the chance to tell him that.
Yes, sometimes life holds a mirror and we look straight into our evilst enemies eyes. Our eyes!
We have to learn to make our enemy is our friend. We just have to accept him/her and take him/her into our arms.
The only way to escape and to survive.
Keep up the really good work... anna
This is well written about the weight of emotions and pain some people have to carry on their shoulders.
It is one of the hardest jobs in the world and it deserves a lot of more attention and acceptation.
So it is good to write a poem about it.
How much power needs one person to survive a job like this.
Keep on writing... anna
This is a poem I can easily relate to. I know what it means to loose the way in life. But, with my experiences I know I´ve just grown out of rearranging my life.
Every single time.
I know, that life follows its own rules as much plans we make.
So I stopped making plans over a long time and I´m just happy, when I´m able to hit every small target. One after the other. That makes even the big targets possible.
Keep on writing... anna
You summed up very well the feeling of christmas.
The crazy feeling before and during. This glance of peace in nearly every household.
But, we don´t have to forget about those people who don´t have family or someone. How do they feel during that time?
I just wish, that everybody can find a little feeling of peace during that special time (and not only during that special time)
... anna
I can so relate to this feelings. From both sides. But, I can tell you, there is always a way. It doesn´t mean the end. If you are strong and with positive thinking you can do a lot.
I know, what I am speaking about.
It is again a well written story, which touches souls.
I wish you a lot of hope and strongness. Both of you.
...anna
You and running out of ideas?
NEVER!!!!
What I read here is, that you are so full of ideas and able to write so many different things, that I just can be impressed.
Again you throw out an emotion, we all know so well and we all can relate to.
Thanks again for a wonderful read.
Keep on writing... anna
This is really cute. I loved it.
What comes out of a kids mouth is just amazing.
How old is little Hannah?
The simplicity is so wonderful.
It is round and why to say something complicated like tomatoe if you can easily say apple.
Hope you come up with more stories like that.
Keep on writing... anna
I´m not sure, if I really understood, what you have written here, but somehow I am fascinated.
I don´t know, what exactly it is.
I can feel the deep meaning and it really hook me.
I understand the beginning and the end, but in the middle part I am a bit lost.
Anyway, I really like it and maybe you explain it a bit to me (could be the language barrier, that I don´t get the complete meaning)
You made me read it over and over and still, I could read it again and again, without being bored.
Thank you.
Keep on writing... anna
This is a big chance for writers, who write short stories or make short movies.
I will send the link to a producer I "know" and maybe he is interested (don´t know, how busy he is or if he pays attention to this link, but it will be a chance)
I will see, if I find time for reviews and maybe I am able to add a short story aswell (I fear, if I write a short story I need some help with re-reading and correction as I am from germany and my english isn´t that perfect, but anyway, maybe I have an idea or the time for an idea )
I will bookmark your link and promise you, that I will come back on it as soon as possible.
Thanks for these chances and I hope many people will see it the same way.
Keep on writing and all the other stuff you are doing... anna
You are the one for the right questions. As always I enjoyed this poem again big time.
You have a special feeling for composing a poem. It not only looks good, it even makes sense in a way everybody can understand, without being simple.
You know, how much I enjoy to read you stuff.
Keep on writing... anna
To relate life to a common meaning about woman, man and kids behaviour is a great idea.
I loved reading it. I enjoyed it a lot.
It is fantastic written and I like the rythm of the verses.
And, I hope, the man never oversleeps.
Interesting style. Not, what I thought it would be, but that doesn´t mean, it is bad. No, not at all. More the other way around.
I so can imagine, someone sitting close to a candle to get the small flame of light and to see, what he/she is writing down.
Good idea and an interesting read. Thank you.
Keep on writing... anna
This is a very good story. Funny in the beginning and thrilling in the end.
I so enjoyed reading it. As it counts for all the good stories I´ve read here before, I will not let too much out and will not tell everybody what´s written in it as I think, more people have to read it and it would be half the fun, if they know already too much about the story.
Anyway, a fantastic and enjoyable read. Hope many, many will read it here as a story like this deserves it.
Keep on writing... anna
Fantastic thoughts are running free here. I enjoyed reading it and found myself in there really good. I always sit down and reflect over my past and future. The good and the bad, you can´t have one without the other. You can always find something good in a bad experience. At least,you kow one good thing, you survived.
And, if you think to close, you will find something bad in a good memory. If you just try hard enough. But, why should someone want to do this
Really a good put. Made me think about some things again.
Keep on writing... anna
Yes, home is where your heart is. And your heart is where your love is. And, soulmates find each other everywhere if they found each other once.
Very good put here. Short, but that makes it so great.
Go on like that, I really like it.
Trust your heart and trust the one who holds your heart.
Keep up the good work...anna
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