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Review of Toe in the Water  
for entry "Dodgy" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a little beauty of writing. Promise and performance are two different words. You have a lot of promise but don't perform it in real-time. Has this promise had any value? So, talent, hard work, and long practice sessions, are also necessary to fulfil your dreams. The WDC continuously gives us prompts for more practice as we perform nicely. The blogger also feels it and mentions it in her blog post. It is a perfect realization.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a wonderful poem. What does music mean to us? This is the subject of the poetry which is wonderfully described by the poet.
As per him, music is nothing but science, but it depends on rhythm and tones. Through the wings of music, we can express our love and all other feelings easily. This is the real beauty of music.
Undoubtedly, it's a fantastic performance.
Write on!
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another important rhyming poetry by the poet. We, all people, have a certain aim in our life. But achieving those is not so easy. Many known and unknown obstructions will be there. It is obvious. Mental toughness is required to fight against those situations. You will come in contact with different people.
If you handle those obstructions correctly, you will be the winner. Otherwise, you will be another addition to the unsuccessful list. None remember the efforts of an unsuccessful person. The poet inspires us touch the goal.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It may happen anytime when you are a teenager. But, is it love or just an infatuation? Only time can tell it. But, it is a fantastic first-person 'Persona' poem. There is no doubt about it.
It's a love at first sight. The teller can't think any more except for that person. So, feels like a huge attraction. But, we don't have any slightest indication of love or hate from the other side. Most probably, it is a one-sided affair.
The characteristics of an ideal Monologue are also present in this writing effort.
Overall, a brilliant beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review of Toe in the Water  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a thoughtful blog post it is! Property writing is a creative form of art. Every poet has the liberty to express self-thoughts as self-wishes that should be meaningful. At the same time, every reader has a self-choice.
When a reader likes a creation, the author becomes successful. That is what I collect from this nice little piece.
It is extremely well written.
Write on!
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Review of Meet Again  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an ideal short story that fulfils all the characteristics of a perfect short story.
There are only three characters in the story. The teller, Marie and John. John died in an unfortunate plane crash. Marie, the mother of him, can't tolerate that shock and becomes mentally disbanded. It is obvious. So, the narrator appears as a mental recovery therapist. If John remains alive, the story can not begin. So, he becomes the central character despite his direct presence. That's why the story must be considered in a rare category.
The pace is fast. There is no single pocket where it loses that pace. The flavour of suspense is intact throughout the story.
Overall, a shining performance. I hope we will enriched through her in future, too.
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Review of What of present?  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very very thoughtful poetry. The poet raises an interesting question here. We live in the present though it existed very short time. Now it is present, but in the next second, it will be past. So, becomes lengthy with every passing moment. The future is incoming endlessly. We should try to make our future better and prosperous.
It's truly a well written poem.
Keep writing.
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Review of Toe in the Water  
for entry "Farewell Bob" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
One of the greatest comedy actors Bob Newhart died on the 18th day of July. It's a great loss. He will no longer entertain us through his lively acting.
He is taking rest forever in California forever. But we cannot forget his contributions, especially as a comedian. The blogger expresses those in his blog post effective way.
I pray to God for the departed soul.
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Review of My partner  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very speedy lifestyle. I like it. It is not only speedy but I must appreciate your practical sense. Life is a combination of both success and failure. So, there is no scope for frustration when we become unsuccessful. It will be better to rearrange everything and try to be victorious. You understand this fact in almost teenage! It's beautiful.
God bless you.


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for entry "Did You Know?" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Especially, I did not know that fact. In the sixteenth century, a group of poor people lived who sold their urine to a local tannery for tanning leather.
They just need to buy a urine pot.
There was another section of people who belonged below the poverty level. They didn't have to buy a urine pot.
The lack of education directed them in the wrong direction. A panic was created.
Poverty and lack of education may stop the progress of a community which has been described here. These touch our hearts.
Thanks to the writer for the brilliant blog post.
Write on!
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Review of Chapter 1  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's another impressive writing effort. The first chapter begins beautifully. We can't predict what will be going to happen. But, something interesting will take place. I can also speculate that human psychology will play an important role here in the story.
The central character of the story is none other than Sophie Marie McIntosh. She is very much unsatisfied with what way life is going. Even she went to psycho counselling, but there was no positive result. The problem remains as it was before.
What will happen next? We are eagerly waiting in the next chapter.
The fiction started well.
Keep writing.

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Review of Summer Storm  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful rhyme it is! The poet describes a storm in the summertime. It came suddenly and stayed for a little period. Lightening struck and thunder cracked. Rain was falling at a speed. It poured down flooding low-lying ground.
Overall, a tremendous destruction took place. The scene was very dangerous, but you couldn't forget the stunning glamour of nature.
It will take some time to retain normalcy again. But, everything will be alright. 'the neighbors child cries' indicates the same.
It's truly a bright beginning.
Go ahead.
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Review of Toe in the Water  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's truly a splendid blog post. Don't make fun of a needy person. This is the topic. The subject is very serious but we enjoy it due to the efficient writing style.
The teller and her mate went to a professor's house where they found a gentleman who had come earlier than them.
He began to speak. If anybody asked any questions, he repeated the same from the beginning every time.
He was a poor encyclopaedia salesman and had learned his sales pitch by heart. He didn't know anything. They enjoyed it brutally but with age, they realized that was wrong.
That pain of that man touches our hearts.
This is the true beauty of writing.
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Review of Light on my path  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
On an Easter dawn, the teller again realises the glory of God in a new form once again. Lord Jesus shows us that way how we turn ourselves from certain death to immortality with prayerful songs of deep devotion, gratitude, and eternal belief.
If any person understands that truth, as a human, his or her way of life will be enlightened forever.
What a brilliant writing where the real truth of every life has been hidden.
Write on!

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Review of Insert title here  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly thoughtful poetry. The poet scans a perfect image of our mind nicely. The author uses 'blindness' symbolically. The actual meaning of this 'blindness' is nothing but ignorance. Despite our unawareness, we often try to do so many things. We become failures in our attempts. We curse our fade, but we wouldn't try to understand what wrong have done in illusion.
It is a very common problem that the poet raises.
We should take lessons from our already-done mistakes and begin a steady progress toward our future.
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Review of Goals  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a superb poem is written by the poet. It is a fantastic rhyming poetry that motivates us to accomplish plans.

We dream many. Some of them fulfil but not all. This is the reality of our lives. So we should not get upset about our failure. We need to replan it. If it suits our ability, we must be successful this time. Therefore, there is no scope to be frustrated. This inspiration is given to us through this beautiful poem.
Though the poet uses the simplest possible words, he adds different dimensions to the writing.
The readability is awesome.
But I shall be more happy if I see 'Inspirational' as a genre in place of 'Educational'.
It's a brilliant effort.
Write on!
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Review of Goodness  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a fantastic poem to describe what the real goodness is. It is an artistic as well as effective way. We set many goals. Some of them are relevant, but maximum irrelevant. For running behind those targets, we ignore many blisses. Our goodness is to enjoy those blissful moments.
What a brilliant beginning.
Keep writing.
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Review of reading feelings  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly a little gem. Indeed, everybody can not know how crucial an affair is! Especially when it involves with love relationship. My heart is not your toy. Once, you told me that you love me. In very next day, you broke up the relationship! That wasn't fair.
Fortunately, all don't follow that. It's a great shine.
Like the poet, we, the general people who want harmony, hope that none will fishermen anybody without sufficient necessary reason. The poem inspires us to love.
It is a very bright beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review of The Good Ole Days  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a thoughtful writing it is! The writer is one of the important authors. He is an experienced fighter for life which is reflected in this particular writing. Despite some bitter experiences, how to live a meaningful life? He searches for the valuable answer that he shares through this writing.
Thanks again for his beautiful attempt. It helps us a lot. We remain grateful to him forever.
Write on!


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Review of Book Jumping  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
The title of the chapter is a fantastic one. That is 'Who?'. You also mentioned that the readers are 13+. That means they are teens. They love excitement.
So, the subject will be who is under that incident. So, there will be a happening. Reason unknown.
Most importantly, you may create either a detective or a horror horror story. There is no bar. Please, rewrite it.
There is every possibility to build an interesting story.
Wish you the best of luck.
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Though it is a bit longer poem that tells us the sad life story of Miss Henrietta, a lonely woman.
She tried to do all of her perfectly. But, unfortunately, that was not enough to satisfy those people. Nobody liked her. So, her life was full of loneliness. She couldn't get anyone to share her emotions.
Once, she died. Her cursed life ended. None got upset.
The beautifully tells us the pathetic life of Miss Henrietta. We can feel her pain.
By the grace of God, none will live a cursed life like Miss Henrietta. I pray for it to God.


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Review of Nan  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful rhyme it is! This is a wonderful tribute to Nan whom the teller loves. Unfortunately, she passed away. But, that girl, Nan, remains as bright as she is now forever in the heart of the narrator. As a lover, he just wants to hug her for the last time physically before she goes to heaven. Though she will no longer be in the material world, her memory will not be faded.
It is very emotional and can touch our hearts. We feel pain.
Overall, it's a brilliant writing effort.
Keep writing.


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Review of In Mongolia  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a lovely little poem. The poet fantastically draws the image of the sacred heart of a child. She is a baby. She is simple and cordial. She loves her pet camel very much. So, that baby enjoys the companion of her favourite pet. Even the rough atmosphere can't make her as unhappy as she is with her camel.
It is an excellent poem.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is a poem about a man who wishes something different from his life, but those desires of life remain unfulfilled. His waiting period never ends. It is certainly a sad incident but not very uncommon. It happens sometimes. I pray to God these incidents should be minimied.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Though the poem is short in length, the meaning of the poem is too deep in the real sense.
We have seeds of a lot of dreams. That should be preserved properly from childhood until death. The inspiration to fulfil them can be the resources to live a meaningful and prosperous life.
It is an excellent poem.
Write on!


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