This (in my opinion) is the most BEST giantess story i have ever read! It isn't really erotic (at least not so far) but it's got the length, the creativity, and the humor above all others! This is my instant favorite!
But just to tell you (since you're better at stories than i), you should have lisa get a new and improved size-changing watch with a capacity to enlarge her up to 1000 feet tall and shrink her down to 1 foot tall. The reason for this is because i thought of a VERY interesting technique lisa could use against enemys instead of just stomping: she can make an "explosion"!
but not as in blowing herself to pieces. I mean for lisa to twist the dial on her watch very very fast from the smallest size she can manage with her new size-changing watch(1ft.) to the largest size (3000ft) in a tenth of a second! So if my calculations are correct, she would grow at 30,000 feet per second! This extreme expansion in size would push the air around lisa outward so fast (30,000ft/s)(9144m/s) that the gust of explosive wind she makes could wipe out buildings and other enemies and things!(not to mention a shockwave and sonic boom! >=D) And also just to tell you, even the most powerful high explosives such as RDX and PETN only reach explosive velocities of around 8,000 and 9,000 meters per second. >;]
and of corse, you can apply and modify this concept in a number of ways. I desperately look forward to this new technique of lisa's watch being in action in 1 of ur upcoming chapters! It would b so cool! (but of corse only if you want) <;]
anyways i wish you luck to the most advanced and greatest GTS story! ^_^
The story looks like its off on a nice start! It's got detailed descriptions and all! Also, i'v got a thing for succubi and Lamia! lol (and other helf-women creatures like mermaids and stuff ^_^)
If only the story was longer to start! <xD oh well i supose it'll eventually get there <=]. I can't wait!
And as a curiosity, are u, like, waiting 4 people to add to your story or r u just not up for story writing? <=] (cuz u'v made a great intro but u didnt bother to make the rest) lol
It'd have to say that this interactive story is starting off pretty smoothly! slower that some, but smoothly. It's got all sorts of fantasies people can think of. not every fantasy just yet though. thats why u sahould keep adding to it with lots of diverse and creative choices! (however odd, disgusting, or beautifully done, it's still a great piece of creativity!) keep at it!
This is turnin out to b quite an interesting story! not only did i read the part where i chose to be a male, I even read what happens if u chose to be a female. both sides of the storys are AWESOME! I would contribute (add) to the story, but i think u'd like to do the honors for the 100th chapter ;]. So i'll wait till then to start adding stuff ^_^.
keep it up dude! i can't wait 4 the next chapter!
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