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Review of Costumes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was very entertaining throughout the entire story. The dialogue is terrific, and the anticipation of how it will all end kept me attentive through the story.

It's well written, easy to read through, and I did not find any errors or suggestions. In all, I enjoyed the story and the ending, which completed the switch entirely.

Well done!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story and very enjoyable. It captured my attention right away and continued to hold my interest throughout. As I read this, I found myself thinking about what was to come next, as well as how this would end. However, the ending was a wonderful and humorous surprise that completed this story perfectly.

Well done!


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Review of My WdC Story  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
After seeing I was tagged in my Notifications, I sped over to see what I'd done; actually to see why I was tagged. I read through the item and found I can relate to quite a bit of what you have shared and I believe many other's can as well. I also found it very interesting how it all worked into the present. I did find it difficult to believe that it's only been seven months that you have graced us with your presence and shared so much with us.

I would have given this a thumbs up, or more likely a heart, but I decided it is more deserving of at least a comment, even better, a review telling you how much I enjoyed this.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon this item in Read & Review, and the title caught my attention. I read through the poem the first time just enjoying the rhythm and flow as I took in the imagery you painted with your words. Being February, this poem reminded me of spring and the end to winter. You did a marvelous job of describing, using colorful words and a catchy rhyming pattern.

I read the poem a second time looking for anything in need of correction or suggestion, but I didn't find any.

This is well done and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Crabby Dash  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this item on the Newsfeed and the title caught my attention and made me curious; the title did a great job leading me to the poem.

The poem is well written, clear and tells a wonderful story. The rhyming adds to the enjoyment of reading this and the flow tracks well with the crabs racing. This item is full of description and portrays an active image for the reader.

I did not find anything to add, subtract, or change; I can offer no suggestions. You did a wonderful job and created a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Bathtub Dilemma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this in Read & Review and was stopped by the title. Interested I read the poem.

This is a great piece of writing, the poem flows smoothly and the rhythm is terrific. The rhyming pattern adds to the effects of the poem, and the word choice is great.

I didn't find anything to correct, this is a well written poem. Great job.

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Review of A Hawk's Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw this on the Newsfeed, and being Valentine's Day, thought it was very fitting; fitting especially for those who do not have someone to enjoy the day with.

This is very beautiful and touching, a poem I believe anyone would enjoy and relate too. The rhythm is smooth and flowing, the rhyming is awesome. There are no errors that I find, no corrections or suggestions to make.

A wonderful poem, great job.

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Review of The Fisherman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this item in Read & Review. This is a classic story; in my youth I knew a man who, although not a fisherman, was very much like the man in the story. And, like the story, a young boy walked up to him and they soon became friends.

I feel that sometimes we are all like that fisherman, just biding our time, mostly unnoticed. This story helps one reflect, it is well written, and enjoyable.

I did not find any errors and have no suggestions. Well done!

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Review of Mood Senryu  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon this poem, "Mood Haiku" while strolling through "Read a Newbie". It's a short poem, three lines, twelve words about feeling tired.

I enjoyed reading this and found it apply describes how I feel when I'm tire and or exhausted. The word choices are terrific and portray and excellent image. The poem flows nice and smooth from start to finish.

A very nice poem that I really enjoyed; terrific writing.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this in Read & Review, and since this is one of my all time favorite songs (I have a lot of them) I read the item. I grew up in a small town, so naturally after school I wanted to experience the city and lived for six months in Minneapolis Mn; that was enough and I was heading back to the small town life.

Everything in the item I could relate with, perhaps with a slightly different point of view (for example I worked towards a B.S. degree), not penniless, but with few pennies, and I spent a period suffering with severe depression.

Why do I mention this? Because your item, and the wonderful way it's written brought back these memories of a simpler time; I enjoyed reading this.

Well done and thank you for sharing.

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Review of Semper Fidelis  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
In trying to be more productive, I've been doing more reviews, especially poetry reviews. I believe this helps in my own writing and can be inspiring.

The title of you poem was the first thing to capture my curiosity. After reading it, I felt like my own emotions towards my wife had been captured and written by your hand.

In reviewing, I didn't find anything to change or correct, it's very well written. It reads smoothly, it's clear and concise, and you have done a wonderful job of painting with words. I found this very touching and beautiful, thank you for sharing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came across this short poem in Read & Review. The title made me curious, and at first did not see how the title applied to the poem. But, after a moment of looking back over the poem, the Title fits well.

I enjoyed the poem, the multiple meaning it portrays to me, and how it caused me to think about both the title and the poem.

This is very well written, great job!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I came upon this poem in Read & Review and was captured by the title. As I read the poem, I enjoyed the story and especially the ending. The rhyming pattern and choice of wording are terrific and the poem flows with a smooth rhythm.

I did not find any errors or corrections and I have no suggestions. I feel that any change would take away from this poem, well done!

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Review of August  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this item in Read & Review.

A freestyle poem about the month of August, this reads well, is easy to follow, and draws a vivid image for the reader.

I did not find any corrections or mechanical errors. I like the way it reads, and find it a poem that many will relate with.

Being February, it brings back memories of July and August, hot, humid, and filled with biting insects. A reminder that February has it's benefits!

This is a great item, well done, and enjoyable; thank you for sharing.

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Review of Restoration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came across this poem in Read & Review.

It's Tanka poetry, something I've tried my hand at a time or two, so I was interested in the format and style.

This poem flows very nicely, and it has a very nice rhythm to it. I did not find anything out of place, no mechanical issues, and no grammatical problems. I'm not sure what the requirements are for a Tanka poem; I would have to look it up.

What I'm saying is, this is a great poem, it's enjoyable to read, and I find it worthy of five stars.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I read and enjoyed all five poems listed in the Newsfeed, but picked this one to do a review. Why? Because it hit hard. I'm nursing my first cup of coffee, and thinking this short poem fits perfect with my state of mind.

The poem has a great rhythm, the form adds to the enjoyment of reading it, and it flows quite smoothly, like good brewed coffee.

In just eleven words you described quite well the first cup of coffee enjoyed in the morning.

All five poems are great and well written, but this one reached out.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting article titled, "Interesting facts about Different Dog Breeds". the article gives information on a lesser known breed of dog, "Dogo Argentino" which is a great family dog. The breed also requires, as many do, both cognitive & physical activity or they will become bored.

I found the article interesting and informative. The structure is sound and I didn't find any mistakes. I do have one question, however. The title indicates facts about different dog breeds, yet the article only gives facts on one breed; I found this to be a bit misleading.

Just something to consider and think about.

Thank you for sharing this information. Nice writing!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and welcome to Writing.Com! Along with writing, giving reviews is also a part of the site, and very rewarding. In addition, spend some time on the Community Newsfeed, it allows you to see posts from all the other members. At the top, just click on Community instead of Personal. It's a great place to ask questions; you can also look through Writing.Com 101 at the top, right side of the page. It will guide you through anything and everything Writing.Com

It looks like you have created an item just fine, although various items can be created depending on type of membership. Remember, if you have questions and can't find an answer, ask in the Community Newsfeed.

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Review of Why me, Cupid?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
With VD (Valentine's Day) almost here, this seemed like a good poem to read and review. I fully enjoyed reading it! It flows very smoothly, the rhymes ripple throughout the poem like water under a gentle breeze (maybe from Cupid's wings), and the imagery is great. This is a terrific work of art, thank you for sharing it with us.

And, best of luck dodging Cupid's arrows!

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Review of Brown Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this poem, it portrays the love of brown eyes, and the lady that has them. The rhyming sequence is terrific and there is wonderful flow throughout the poem.

Upon reading this poem, I found memories of a brown eyed lady I was very fond of and how deep and bottomless those beautiful eyes were when looking into mine.

Thank you for the wonderful poem and the memories it stirred. I didn't find anything worthy of changing and there were no grammatical errors. This is very nicely written, great job.

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Review of The Log Cabin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This item is an extract from the book 'Roseann and the children.' It is well written and shows a vivid image of a cabin on a lake. It's cloudy but the setting sun's colors show between the clouds and it's a beautiful evening to sit on the dock to enjoy the sunset with feet immersed in the water.

Is this an unfinished item in your portfolio? It sounds like a terrific story. The only thing I would suggest is to provide a bit more information of where the excerpt comes from.

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Review of MY LOVE FOR YOU  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem about love. You describe the love between two people very well, sharing thoughts and feelings with smooth flowing lines. The rhyming pattern adds to the beauty of the poem and gives the pace a nice, even rhythm. You have done a wonderful job of sharing emotions and feelings of love that is a joy to read.

I did not find anything to correct or change; no misspelling or grammatical errors. Great job!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a wonderful poem with great insight and a wonderful message. I love the reference to the heavens full of stars; it's humbling to look up on a clear night and see God's majestic works.

The rhyming pattern is terrific and adds to the beauty of the poem, it reads and flows smoothly with great rhythm. I didn't find any errors or mistakes.

I love the message of hope this poem ends with. Thank you for sharing it.

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Review of Silver Linings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great poem that flows nicely. It's freestyle, so there isn't any distraction by meter, but at the same time each line transitions smoothly and maintains balance throughout the poem. Likewise, there is no rhyme involved so each line can cary a clear and concise message through the item.

It gives a great viewpoint of thought and feeling. Good job.


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Review of Competition  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I came upon this item in Read & Review. I found this to be an interesting poem, written for sports and competition, but also pertaining to life in general.

I did not find anything wrong as far as mechanics and grammar; I'm not the best at editing my own.

As for structure: The poem moves along smoothly with good rhythm and form. The rhyming pattern is aabb throughout the poem, and you did very nice job.

This is a great poem and well written.

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