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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title of this poem caught my attention, but I was not expecting the poem to read as it does; an enjoyable surprise.

I enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed the play on words to keep the rhyming pattern going, and I enjoyed the smooth, flowing rhythm. I found myself laughing as I read through the verses, and I particularly enjoyed the ending.

This is very well done and a great poem. Thank you for sharing it.

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Review of This Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your poetry. The title of this poem captured my attention; we all enjoy receiving gifts. I enjoyed reading the poem, it is a message of the gift we all get with each new day.

The poem flows very well, the rhyming pattern is terrific, and the rhythm carries the reader along. I did not find any errors, typos, or corrections; it is very well written.

You did a great job, thank you again for sharing this.


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Review of Higher Powers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I picked your poem to review because the title captured my attention. As I read through your poem, I was surprised by how much you said in each short verse. You use very descriptive language, adding imagery to your words. I did not find any errors or mistakes, and I enjoyed reading your poem. This is well written; good job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was taken in by the title and decided to review this poem. It's not what I expected, but I'm glad I did read it. I found the poem interesting and fun to read. I did not find any errors and can offer no suggestions, it's fun, it flows smoothly, and I enjoyed it. Good job.

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Review of It's All Fine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The title of this poem caught my attention, so I decided to read and review it. I think this is something we can all relate to, either ourselves or someone else. Often, we say we are fine, just a cover to spare others from the trouble lying beneath.

I also read the notes and agree, the second stanza could use a bit of clarification, but the poem is nice as is. I did not find any corrections needed.

I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing.


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Review of The depth of love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I was looking for an item to review and the title of this poem caught my attention. You did a wonderful job of describing love in this poem. The poem flows smoothly and describes love very well even though it's only three verses long. You use very colorful and meaningful words and balance them in each verse.

I only found two places that should be corrected, unless you meant to write it this way. The fourth line in the second and third verses "i" should be capitalized; "i'm sorry"—"I'm sorry" and saying i can—saying I can.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title of this poem caught my attention because today saw the first robin of spring. I enjoyed reading this poem, it's very well written, it has a wonderful flow, and the rhyming pattern is wonderful. I could picture the birds and hear them as I read the lines, your descriptions add imagery to your words.

I didn't find anything wrong, out of place, or in error, this is very well written. Great job.

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Review of Winter Homecoming  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it. As I read this, I remembered our family traveling to my grandparents house for Christmas. It would be dark out when we arrived and the soft yellow glow was so inviting when we arrived.

I did not find anything in need of correction, it's well written. It flows smoothly with great rhythm and rhyme.

Great writing!


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Review of That's Alright  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a very well written poem that tells a story I think many readers can relate well with. I did not find any errors in your writing and enjoyed reading this. It moves along smoothly from verse to verse, it hold the readers attention and draws them along. The poem has a smooth, even rhythm that makes this enjoyable to read, and the message in the end wraps up the poem completely.

Well done!

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Review of Tomorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting and entertaining poem. The topic, time, is something we can all relate to. I found this especially interesting since today once again slipped by.

I did not find any errors, it reads well, it moves forward smoothly, and is well constructed. This is well written and well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very wonderfully written poem! I enjoyed reading this, it has a wonderful balance and flows smoothly through each verse. The rhythm matches the flow and tempo of the item and the rhyming pattern adds depth. Each verse is filled with great description and creates a wonderful image.

I didn't find any errors and found this very well done!

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Review of Never Bitter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very interesting and erotic tale. In it's shortness I found myself wondering about the past but understand it would turn a short story into a novel (possibly an idea). The story moved along at a smooth but quick pace, it held my attention, and by the end, I was not disappointed. The only thing I found in need of correction is in the line:

"Leave that sinking gas station Bart. Face it, its glory days are over. You've got to move on.

There's more than plenty of room in my home. Come, stay with me. Don't make me beg."

It's one statement, so it shouldn't have the space separating it.

This is well written, interesting, and enjoyable; well done.

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Review of Ladybug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fun poem to read about ladybug and their instinct to find shelter before the cold north winds bring winter. the poem has a nice, smooth rhythm as I read through each line. There is balance and flow throughout each verse, and the pattern of rhyming adds to the enjoyment of the poem. I also enjoyed the contrast between winter and spring in the beginning and the last verse.

Well done.

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Review of Grilled Mackerel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I saw this item on the Hub and followed the link. The image of the fish grilling had me even more eager for warmer weather and outdoor activities. The recipe, written in the form of a poem, is interesting and sounds delicious. I enjoyed the visual "ingredients" listed through the item. This is an interesting item, it's well written, and very enjoyable.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Everybody knows knock-knock jokes, a few are good, most make us cringe even while we laugh. You took this form of joke and turned it into a fun to read poem. I like how you incorporate some knock-knock jokes into this poem as well as some very descriptive responses. I enjoyed the rhyming pattern throughout the item, and I enjoyed how you ended it. This is well written and flows very well. It's a fun poem to read; well done.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very catchy limerick for St. Patrick's Day. I enjoyed this; it brought a smile as I read the last line. I like the rhyming, it's catchy and original. But the last line ties it up so nicely with not only the rhyming, but the play on the last word.

Very well done and proof that not all limericks need to be bawdy or naughty, and writing such is definitely not "fraud-ie".


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Review of Pop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting little poem. I enjoyed reading it and did not find any errors in it. You use a wonderful assortment of wording to make this poem very descriptive. In addition to it showing a tense scene before the race, the poem itself flows smoothly and easily.

A very nice bit of writing, keep it up.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this poem very entertaining to say the least. The imagery it portrays is adventurous, romantic, and funny. I had to read this twice, because the first time through I was too intent on the story and didn't pay any attention to grammar or punctuation. After my second read, I didn't discover anything in error.

A great poem, well written, and well done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the site, I think you will really enjoy it here. I enjoyed reading your mission statement, and I hope you find journaling here productive and inspiring. There are some blogging sites that you may find interesting and if you have questions, posting in the Newsfeed is a great place to get answers and meet other members.

I did find one thing in you're item that you may want to change, the word whit should be wit in this case.

That's another wonderful part of the site, reviewing for other writers. I'm weak in grammar and it's wonderful to have someone aid me in editing.

Best of luck!

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Review of PERFECT NIGHT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very lovely poem, thank you for sharing it.

I enjoyed reading this poem, I enjoyed the message it holds, and I enjoyed the rhyming stanzas. It has a nice, even flow and rhythm; it flows easily and smoothly. I especially enjoyed the ending stanza, a perfect ending.

I did not notice any errors within the item, it is well written!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this, I enjoyed the rhyming, and I enjoyed the emotion inscribed in the poem. It's filled with love's pain, something I think most of us have suffered. It reminds me of past loves and past hurt, and past sorrow.

I believe a good poem should be felt, and I did. I fond this very well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon your poem and the title grabbed my attention right off. As I read through your poem I enjoyed the rhythm of the lines and stanzas; the pattern of rhyming added to the joy of reading this. You did a wonderful job of describing love and the heartaches it brings, even as the love throbs on.

I enjoyed this, it's well written, and very well done.


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Review of Silence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a very enjoyable poem and very relatable for most readers. It's well worded, has wonderful flow and great rhythm. I enjoyed this as I read it, finding it brought past thoughts to the front of my mind.

You did a terrific job writing this poem, well done and write on.

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Review of "Don't Bother Me"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I found this to be a very interesting and entertaining story. I'm sure everyone can relate to the annoying fly and how difficult they can be to exterminate.

I was caught off guard by the gasoline and resulting burns; I wasn't expecting that or the results at all. It's nice reading a story one can relate to, yet still be surprised.

I also enjoyed your ending, which again, was a pleasant surprise.

I found this to be well written and well done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting story; as I already knew, you have a wonderful imagination. I didn't look in depth for mechanical, grammatical, or spelling errors, but in reading I did not notice any.

The story captivates right from the start and holds the reader. As the chapter finishes, I find myself wondering what's to come next.

A very good start for a story, well written, and like always, well done!

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