Given that this was a prologue, I would say it will definitely serve as a great start to whatever you're going after. It certainly leaves you with a lot of options (plot-wise) going forward.
You made a few spelling mistakes. For example, you have "to" and "too" mixed up, but other than that the grammar was pretty solid.
At points, your writing is too wordy and you over-explains things. In other cases, your sentences don't exactly make sense. I would start looking for these issues in the first three paragraphs because they seemed most prevalent there.
Keep writing!
First off, this poem strikes a great balance between relatable humor and a clever rhyme-scheme. I enjoyed reading it. I especially loved the line about sitting in "cattle class" and the stanza regarding "sumo folk". This poem, overall, was very creative and amusing (particularly considering the prompt). Well done
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