"I wondered in a worry" - Wouldnt it be bes to remove 'a'?
Other than that, this was a lovely poem. Im not a great fan of rhyming in poetry,because I dont understand it sometimes, but this was surprisingly easy to undersatand. I could actually imagine the snow and the blurry water. love the imagery. Great Job!!
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