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Review by Comalarosa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this! Every line I read, I was able to mentally visualize where you were... almost like I was there. This is a writers "Sixth" sense - being able to write in such a way that paints a vivid picture for their reading audience. VERY well written... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this. It's sweet and simple, yet quite meaningful. I saw only one typing error... last sentence. Instead of "in a just..." it should be "in just a..." Keep up the great work! :)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This has good flow and rhyme... with a "visual" of where you are and how you feel. I encourage you to keep writing and keep up the good work!
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
This was very honest and direct... a bit complaining, but everyone gets to that point once in a while. I think God understands and sees the intent of our heart. I believe that it is OKAY to take a step back from counseling, say NO, and take time for yourself. I believe that we each have some sort of calling on our life, but I also believe that God gives us and expects us to use some common sense when we need restoration for ourselves. This is, in no way, a weakness, but a place where we can draw from God's strength.
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Review of Asylum  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
You have my attention... I can hardly wait to read more! I like your usage of words and how they flow. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. Keep up the great work!
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Review of Math Class: Kiwi  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute! It had my attention to the very end, but the ending threw me. A few grammer errors, but nothing major. Overall I enjoyed the story. Keep on writing. You have a way of keeping people's attention!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting concept... thoughtful!
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Review of Trinity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very warm and heartfelt poem by another believer in Christ. I applaud your willingness to share the truth!
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Review of My Wings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! I could really relate with this poem. Keep up the awesome work!!!
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Review of Lose The Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a "good read" and I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading other chapters, and encourage you to add to this story. There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major. Keep up the good work!
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