DNAN's (dnan) Reviews

Thanks for the article and advice. One question I have, though, is that bold font looks so much better. It's distinctive and easier to read than regular letters. Why not write in bold font? Is this your opinion, or an industry standard? Also, I wrote a whole book, with spaces between paragraphs, and no indent. Plus, it's written in bold font. What do I do now?

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#2437079

Review of The Unknown Soldier

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

wow, good piece.

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#2434101

Review of Retired Founder, Rising Stars Program

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

good way to get writers to mix and help out each other

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#2434085

Review of Addictive Prime Obsession

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I suffer from addiction also. You've well captured the feelings involved.

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#2434082

Review of Et Tu, Brutus

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

honest and powerfull.

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#2434075

Review of From Lances to Light Sabers

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

The essay flowed along. There were no attempts to be "profound", which I appreciate.

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#2431828

Review of Playing Sock Solitaire

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

You noticed that too! Six pair turn into twelve separate ones!

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#2429533

Review of Have You Heard the Rumor?

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

entertaining, and concise.

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#2426872

Review of Origins of Troublesome Musings

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

interesting idea, forbidden writings.

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#2426859

Review of Wee Witch Next Door

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

lilting writing, almost a melody.

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#2426842

Review of Time Travels the River

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Nice precept, a different style and subject to write about.

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#2426833

Review of Shadow Puppet Storyteller

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

You invited me to read more of your work, after "Aunt Diana", so I did. You've put a lot of work into your blog site. Are you published? Are you trying to be? I'm getting discouraged. Agents don't even want to look at my work, much less reject it after they've seen it.

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#2425834

Review of Storygaming

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

sounds like how "Naked Came the Stranger" was produced.

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#2425827

Review of What Greets You in the Dark Eats Light

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

interesting story precept

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#2354263

Review of When I Love You Loses It's Meaning

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I feel your pain...Your writings speak of some emotional tragedy, especially for one so young. Dave (dnan)

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#2354256

Review of Is This Real?

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I too went through the "dark night of the soul" you describe. The walls we build to guard our emotional wounds work to keep out any healing love. Dave.