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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
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Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details showing a sense of longing to be with someone, just like a lady has. The longing to belong and be loved. Just like her. A craving the speaker feels they don't need, yet craves. This emotion is persistent throughout and flows smoothly and naturally. I love the way the words are used. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job! Keep up the good work!


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Review of YaVont's Bovic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great details. It starts with the meaning of revolution. Then goes to the story about the leader's doing and what's being done about that. YaVont is a cruel leader who only supports the wealthy. Then they watch as the last of the resistance scatters. A revolution begins. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job, and keep up the good work.


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Review of Airborne Weapons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great use of details. Caspin is in the midst of a war zone of Conflicts, and with the Jeesims, they discover the harrowing truth about Airborne Weapons. It turns out the Jeesims had been making their own, too. Better than the Conflicts to destroy most. If not all. The time came, and they activated theirs just in time. On the screens, they watched the action unfold. Good emphasis is made that a war is going on without using the word 'war' too many times. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job, and keep up the good work.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely details capturing the moments as they pass by. Good use of show. The speaker dwelves into their soul until they come across what they are looking for and the results is fascinating. Pacirhyme ng is great. Not too fast or too slow. No rhyme but that's okay. Works out great with this free verse. There is too many choices to pick out one favorite line. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Guilty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great use of action and details showing the dire situation Mrs. Anderson was in. The questions didn't help either. Either way she was going to be convicted. She wasn't going to accept being charged guilty. Pacing is great. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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for entry "Snow" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great use of details. Everything speaks of snow. From the weather being snowy to collecting the snow and bringing it inside its characteristics are implied. Cold and wet. No rhyme but that isn't necessary. Flows great as is. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!


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for entry "Love" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great use of details! Love can be binding in a positive way. It is fulfilling and completes the speaker. There is good in the way it works out. No rhyme, but that's okay. Pacing is good. I love all the lines, it is precise and to the point. It matches the prompt well. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great use of details. I enjoyed reading the details. She is unaware of what is going on far away and the transaction of POV needs to be distinguished somehow. Her POV being one section and the new section describing the city can be separated by an extra return. The forest could be a new section. You can dwelve into a little bit more detail and it would still work. The pacing is great. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. This work has great potential. Great job and keep up the great work!


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Review of Keep Reading!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The focus is this: when we reach the bottom we must turn the page. In real life and when we read. This is so true literally and figuratively. Time continues and we age. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
That sounds exciting! Having a book published and going for book 2. I'm happy for you. This seems like something that would be found in a blog post, so I can say you are on a happy journey. I hope you have success. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Simple and sweet! I agree the animations are very cool. This poem has few words yet creates great imagery. Purpose? To celebrate the animations created by SM. Seems like the guitarist is lonely and looking for their companion. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Mamabear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great details with the same humor as the previous poems. I love it. This time the father monkey is begging his wife to not be angry and to show his dance one more time. He is pleading for his life. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! Gintare sounds like a wonderful person through the vivid imagery presented in this poem. Playful and carefree, she brings joy into the speaker's life. Pacing is right on. The use of rhyme flows smoothly. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this one too. Great details involved in the life of a monkey who discovered poetry with a passion when encouraged by Mom. Just write first. Mistakes can be corrected later. This is true of any writing. I loved all of it, I don't have a certain phrase being overall favorite. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Unique voice! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Mister  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! A stranger on the street who doesn't want to be a stranger. It shows him to be a gentleman. The speaker and him don't know each others names but willing to give it away to each other as well as to go on a date. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great humor throughout the poem! It started out as tiny steps and blossomed into a career. The little one got into stories instead of poems. That job is almost 24/7. Good message to poets: just write. Rules can come later. Don't worry about what others think. Rules is important too. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Your Hawkeye  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The message of loves shines through. Perfect timing with the inclusion of Hawkeye. The feeling of love can be all of these things. The use of color and boldness works out really well too. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling and grammar errors found. It all blends in real well. The use of rhythm works. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great details! A group of men hangs out at a tavern gambling and the gambler keeps on winning every time. They weren't serious about gambling. Then it jumps to afterwards and there was a showdown on the road. Then the cowboy left the place to do singing elsewhere. Voice is smooth and natural. The 3rd person POV works great. I have a suggestion for the middle part you could use {indent} to make those paragraphs easier to read. Characters is believable and realistic. They kept true to their nature and personality. One punctuation suggestion but no spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

a man with a brown scarf and a scar, Suggestion: scar.


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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Great poem! It goes along with the lyrics too. Speaking of love far away and not meant for each other. A longing that is impossible to fulfill. Memories is vivid and enjoyable. The contest asks for a max of 40 lines so you are safe. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Talking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The suspense of what needed to be talked about built up until it was finally said: her cat died. This lead to best friends and a cat sanctuary. A happy ending from a sad event. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Loyalty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great use of show! Bronwyn had to decide between her mother and her husband and that was a tough choice for her to make. In the end she chose her mother over her husband. His ignorance cost him. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No prompt needed for this story. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of At last life won!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great details about the bulbuls! These tiny birds are brave to nest in the neighbor's house. Some dangers presented itself and the birds took action. Finally the chicks grew up and flew over playfully. Quite an adventure for them and you. They rewarded you handsomely. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. I suggest indenting the paragraphs. {indent} No spelling or grammar found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details showing love and forgiveness in a Christian life. It shows how important God and Jesus is. Showing with details is a strength here. I especially liked the beginning. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The personality of young and naive is nothing compared to the personality the poet sees and thinks of you. A sweet ending. I liked all of it. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is realistic and believable. Free verse works out really well. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details! The person showed hope in the light of a flower. The flower worried about that person. Great personalities! Miracles can happen through one simple act. The Cornish Sonnet is followed closely. It fits the prompt in my contest. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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