Overall I liked the poem I got the real sense of sadness and despair. I liked the fact that you kept the same rhyme scheme throughout (maybe with the exception of the last stanza). The rhyming was fluid and it did not seem forced which is always good. So overall great piece and thanks for sharing with us :)
Interesting piece I like the the ideal of the symbolic fog which runs throughout, I like the story line behind the piece and can really feel the emotions of Thomas I would love to know the bit before this scene of what happened. Great piece thanks for sharing with us :)
Overall I liked the piece i fell that some of the rhymes may have been a tiny bit forced which took a little from the overall flow. I liked what the poem was about and overall I would rate it 4 stars :)
Overall I liked the piece the only fault I can find with it is it seems to have no punctuation. The rhyme scheme that you have used works even though in the last few lines you changed it slightly.I feel that some of the words are a bit forced to rhyme which takes away from the flow of it slightly. I could feel throughout the poem the inspiration which you had for writing it. I feel that the poem could have been split into different stanzas as appose to one. Overall a good piece thank you for sharing it with us
Overall I liked the piece and the meaning behind it. I have noticed there are a couple of times when small spelling errors have been made (but don't worry they have not taken anything away from the piece). As much as I admire the fact you have cited where the inspiration for the piece has come from I feel that mentioning that on this particular example made me think of the movie before I had started to read the essay, which may have changed my view on it. As I said earlier I liked the piece and the meaning at the end so thank you for sharing it with us
Overall I liked the poem it was as if I could also feel the realization that you had come to and it's great that you shared that in a poem with us. There are some small spelling mistakes (but don't worry they did not take anything from the poem). So I would like to say great poem thank you for sharing that!
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