I was into this right from the beginning. There is just something wonderful about the title that sums the story up really well. You are so right about dreams. That is exactly how insomnia feels. I really like this Ella. I especially like the bit that talks about the feeling that something is different, even though everything is the same. That feeling that is definitely there. That you can't deny. You have a wonderful way of writing. You seem to capture real life. Real experiences in a way I think a lot of people want to. Well Done.
This poem is so inspirational. The difference between the different feelings you got when you were living alone were so realistic but interesting as well. At first I didn't know what the poem was about and made little sense to me but then I remembered to read the top!
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