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Rated: E | (4.5)
I think it was a pretty good poem actually, and something that makes you think. You are right of course that we all put on a facade, or a mask when we go about our daily lives because we are afraid of people seeing our true selves. One thing that I noticed was your words on the second row "What we wish we were" to me was kind of a tongue twister and difficult to read, to me at least it doesn't flow as naturally as the rest of the poem.

Good job, and keep it up!
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