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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a great story, I really liked it,
you are only 15 imagine hoe good you will be if you keep up the writing.
Great job and keep up the good work
would love to see more please.
Merry christmas and a happy new year love xxx
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Omg what a good story
so was it a ghost?
I really liked this not going to lie I was thinking my god her mam is a witch ,,,, I hope you are ok and not writing from experience.
merry christmas and happy new year x
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Review of My daughter  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
I feel Your pain I really do, I use to be so close with my daughter, dont get me wrong thing were never perfect but we got along.
Things happened as life will often show you and I ended up on drugs I just could not cope with all the pain, I had lost my dad my grandad and my partner in a matter of 8 weeks it was like living a night mare,
I now realise that My body was doing that fight or flight thing.
Im in recovery 2years 10 months and my daughter is 19 and we just dont get along, I know why she hates me but I cant understand why she cant see how hard Im trying, Im an addict Im fighting a battle every day, I honestly believe that she is happy when we are arguing because she doesnt come out of her room, she talks to me like im a bit of dirt and to be honest im sick of it, Im at boiling point now, Its 1 wk to christmas and were not speaking after another fight that she started,,,,,#
Im starting to think that things are always going to be this way and it really upsets me.
I hope your ok I understand completely....
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for this its so helpful. I honestly was really lost and now I'm kinda figuring out so much more,, Im really trying trust me haha
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Review of The Lost Boys  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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That is amazingly written, It's so sad to think how young
those boys are going to war, I can't even imagine how hard it must be for any family to go through it.
Rest In Peace too all the children and men who lost their lives in a war they probably didn't even want to fight in.
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Review of The Long Walk  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow, I had tears in my eyes reading that. It's so hard going through life after losing family and friends but I think we have to have a good life and trust that we will meet then again in the next life, It's what keeps me Soldiering on if I'm being honest,
I'm sorry you have had so much hurt and I'm glad you feeling a bit better now your brothers would be beaming down looking at you full of pride I hope you know that.
Lovely words
Gill
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Review of Helping Hand  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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That was a brilliant story, Really the kind of story I enjoy. You're a newbie? I can't wait to see what other stuff you write I'm looking forward to it.
That was a real short story I could actually Imagine growing into a fantastic story.
Keep up the good work
Well done
Gillian xx
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Review of Tempered Hearts  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Brilliant, I've been trying to write and I keep writing and deleting I have so many ideas I just don't know where to start, I really loved this story wouldn't it be cool if the woman she met on the plane was her relative because they got along so well.
Love your portfolio by the way. Your real positive and I like it.
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Review of What is True  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First of all well done on your recovery. I'm also in recovery. Forgive yourself and try to leave the past in the past. You sound like you are still giving yourself a hard time, I hope you and your kids have an amazing rest of your lives together because you deserve them back, your human and we all make mistakes.
lovely to read these words that I understand, All the best.
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Review of The Funeral  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow this was so good and also so sad, very good I really enjoyed this story.
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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Amazing oh my god I was stuck in haha
I was nearly screaming saying just tell the police everything you know but I know why "if you tell you will go to hell"
Very good I enjoyed that a lot!
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Review of Suitcase  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, What a lovely poem.
I hope youre feeling okay and I hope you keep writing to unload that suitcase.
Things can only get better Please stay positive I know I dont Know you or anything about you but please Know that you matter.
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Amazing story, I really enjoyed it . I wonder if he sold the medallion to pay the bills or kept it, did the traveler return ? I love a good story what a great imagination you have thanks
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi just wondering if this is true because I always sort of predict stuff, I would dream about something or somebody and then I would hear something a few days later, It happened that much that I start telling my sister and my cousin about it.
One day I was with my cousin and i told her about a dream i had about my dad and he was in an ICU ward with all tubes coming out of him but the blanket on his was snow white with little blue tiny flowers a few days later my dad had an accident and we went to see in and he was in the ICU and mu cousin grabbed my hand and said look at the blanket, it was so strange.
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Review of Newbie!!!!  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi id love to read your stuff and give you some feedback , I'm not professional but I'm honest if I like something ill say it and if i don't like something I would not be mean about it, everybody is trying there best
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Review of The Abuser  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm so sorry that you're going through something like this, I understand because I myself was physically and mentally abused for a long enough time, please know that you deserve to be with someone who thinks the world of you and who can't wait to do nice things for you just to see you smile, Please reach out and get help and somebody will want you your abuser just wants you to believe what he's telling you because deep down there scared to lose you and deep down I think you know this, I hope this letter helps you in some small way, You only get one life to be happy don't be afraid to show people.
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (2.0)
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I'm a big fan of TVD, Im just curious are you writing it into your own script and adding new people, or are you writing it down for the people who have never seen it?
I was mesmerized at Mystic Falls .
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Review of ACCIDENTAL HERO  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
[bitem power] oh please hurry and write part two I am so invested in this wonderful story, well done I really enjoyed that.
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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How strange that I found your piece about harry because I was just out in the car and My son asked me to play a song but he called it goodnight, I realized he was talking about the little baby voice at the very start of the song, I love the song it's great but I actually think he's talking about his love for Louis his old band member one direction, I don't know why I just always imagine he's speaking to him when I hear it, its not the same as it was.
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Very good ha Iv never read a story like this before and I really liked it, keep up the great work and i look forward to reading more stories about Lisa and her big fat boyfriend haha
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Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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very interesting, I sometimes feel like us humans should do more like the teens nowadays spend way to much time on social media where as us all years ago had such fun in the outside world, they do not know what there missing, well done keep up the good work
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Review of Dawn of a New Day  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
[bitem power] What a great little story very good I look forward to hearing more from you keep up the good work I enjoyed that one so thank you
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Review of Over you  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a great poem it sounds like this person really hurt you, so write it out of your system and move on if he or she is toxic then you can do better always remember he or she is the villain
I loved it keep up the good work and I hope your ok
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Review of always yours  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Amazing I felt as though in my mind I was watching a film, I could picture all of that so easily that was so well written I want to hear so many more of your stories, keep up the good work that was beautiful.
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Review of Dear Me  Open in new Window.
Review by feathers86 Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, I'm glad to hear that you're going to try and put yourself first, I'm a single mother of 2 my daughter is 18 and my son is 5 he has special needs so like you I don't get much time to myself.
You only live once I hope all your dreams and wishes come true.
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