Ok. So now I'm confused. You should do a series on this. Write poems on What is (whatever)? I really think it's a good idea and you can take credit for it. ;) Just let me know, but I overall thought this was a really unique poem and if you do the series, I will be sure to check it out.
I'm not really am emotional reader...*moment of silence*...ok I am. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know, with the help of sad music, you almost got me on the verge of tears. I wanted to cry inside, but knew it would be a mess if I cried outside. This story touched me. The part that stood out most to me was when the lieutenant checked his watch and then it ended. It was very unexpected. From the beginning, I knew you were writing about 9/11, but until the end, I didn't think much about it as it was in the past. I thank you for the reminder. I randomly found your story sorry for the random review.
Keep writing,
Lizbeth
I am pretty new here too. When I joined I went right to Writer's Cramp. You really couldn't have done worse than me on my first Cramp. I went over by 147 words and had to shorten my story. Back to yours though. I love your expressiveness and that the baby was a blessing to the village. Seems like those people are going to be pretty happy (and blessed);). I liked it!
Keep writing,
Lizbeth
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