The writer describes his experience in funny manner. This piece of writing has got correct proportion of comedy . The writer has described his feelings associated with event of his life .Its an interesting short story in which writer has correctly described his notions , emotions and surroundings
Its an interesting piece of writing in which writer describes the issue from which number of people are suffering. The writer describes this issue in best way .The writer discussed the problem of depression very precisely and skillfully.
The writer skillfully describes the main gist or crux in just three lines which distinguishes him from others writers of same field.I do appreciate your effort regarding haiku.The topic itself grabs the attention of reader at very first look.I do appreciate your last message for review which shows your professionalism
The topic of poem directly grabs the attention of reader. The best thing about the writer is that he knows how to conveys complete sense in three lines and 10 words which is a great skill.writer conveys the main gist in fewer words which is great skill.
The topic of poem is interesting and grabs the attention of its reader.Since its a free verse poetry so it provides an artistic work.The writer has beautifully expressed his emotions and feeling which makes it more interesting.Only that needs to be improved is that writer should write things systematically so that reader understands what he is trying to convey
The poet skillfully describes the emotions and notions.The choice of topic is attention grabing for its reader.The piece of writing depict the true emotions and feelings.the writer is well aware of all the necessary ingredients of poem which distinguish him from other writers.
The topic of poem grabs the attention of reader right from start.It has one short coming that rhyming scheme is neglected though the choice of topic is good.The writer has beautifully expressed emotions and expectations.He skillfully posed different questions to himself
The poem has an interesting topic which grabs the attention of readers right from start till end.The language is simple and easy which enables reader to understand it properly.The description of the rose petal is very good.Everything seems to be in harmony .
the poem is very interesting and the topic grabs the attention of reader . the writer skillfully pose different questions to its reader which is great skill to tackle with content of writing.I really appreciate your effort .The length is perfect and rhyming scheme is up to mark .
In this piece of writing I found that there is less content of discussion .The writer describes the meaning of its username which is really good thing because it makes her followers to know about her and her personal life.This short para describes her present life which is good thing for her followers so they can know about their writer.
The writer describes the lessons he has learnt from his holy book.This is religious message to the followers of his religion and the best thing about article is that language is simple and easy.The writer describes all the things in comprehensive manner and reader cam easily understand the idea or notion behind this message.
The writer describes the changes that took place after rain of summer .He describes the whole scene and creatures who come out after rain.Summer rain is signal of the upcoming winter.The poem is interesting but yet it requires some improvement in content
The writer describes the love story of teenagers and also provide description of emotions and feelings related to teenager's experience.The writer depicts the teenager's notions that came to his mind while he was thinking about the girl.
the writer describes the personal experience of an old man in nursing home where he recalls the time spent with his family and closer ones.He remembers the best part of life which was the time when there was no grief or anxiety in his life and he lived a life without any worry or tension.
the story describes the squirrel and writer's experience with it.The story truely fulfils the ingredients of story which are attention grabing and makes its reader attracted and concentrated throughout story.The writer also relates it with song of "goodbye squirrel" which is based on "earl had to die".
the article is attention grabing and interesting.it tells us about the struggle we make in our everyday life to dwell and survive in the world because its full of competition.Only best can survive in this rushing life full of chaos and materialism.People who believe in their struggle are most fine people who face the grind.
the draft has all the ingredients which it needs.The topic itself is attention grabing and attractive.Writer has precisely described the whole situation in best manner and also described the situation prevailing in our society today.It is a good piece of reading reflecting the situation created in society.
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