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Review of The last goodbye  Open in new Window.
Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is a really good heart warming story with a really convincing portrayal of emotions. I think you've struck just the right balance of playing on your readers emotions, it's subtle and not too in your face, but it's still enough to pull at your heart strings. Beautiful, well done :)
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Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really great, especally the last 3 stanzas. Se things I wasn't sure about
1)fantasy would turned to reality,
Maybe fantasy would turn to reality, or has turned? (unless it was deliberate in which case ignor me!)
2) flowers that didn't bloomed,
Maybe flowers that didn't bloom, or never bloomed.

But that's just nit picking because it is a really god empathetic poem. Well done :)
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Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
aw really sad!! very well structured and written and a great idea :)
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Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
genius *Heart*
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Review of Second Chance  Open in new Window.
Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is brilliant!! i literally couldn't scroll down fast enough! you have a good thick plot with convincing characters and an awesome ending! loved it *Heart*
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Review of A Wise Father  Open in new Window.
Review by katie Bunting Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
this is a really lovely idea and a really good story. You've got a good developing narrative voice but the tone does get lost at some points, but that would be my only criticism. It was really good, i think i might go read it again! :)
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