This was an amazingly well written poem. I found that it sounds like what I have also gone through. With this piece I think you could help others who have faced similar things that you have. It is very important to remember to keep our faith and never give up on ourselves. I loved this poem!
Once upon a time there was a princess who loved to read.Everyday,she would spend hours with her nose stuck in a book. One day, to her horror all the books vanished.She frantically searched through the castle.There was no sign of her books. Because of that,she actually took the time to look around the castle. Until finally,she made her way to the garden. It was then that she realized how much she had missed by being inside all the time reading.
I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written and makes one stop to think about their lives. It has a simplicity to it that grabs the reader and never lets them go. Anyone can enjoy reading this piece. I found it to be relatable as well as a joy to read.
This poem was very heartfelt. It expresses well the love you had for your grandfather. It is never easy to lose someone we are close to. The raw emotion of this piece seeps through every word. The reader can feel the writer's pain.I think people will be able to read this piece and relate to the feelings within it. Very good job on this.
I found that I could relate to this poem. Your words made me remember a time when I went through depression. They genuinely express what a person suffering from depression goes through. This poem makes you think about those feelings and also makes you wonder how you could ever overcome them.
This was an interesting read. I love the sounds of windchimes blowing in the wind. It is such a beautiful sound and amazing at putting one to sleep. This poem was well-written and very different from what I normally read. I enjoyed it very much. Excellent work!
Very interesting poem. I really enjoyed the message behind this one. It takes you to a place where we all seem to go at one point or another over our lifetimes. It was well written and though it was dark, it was enjoyable at the same time. I can relate to this piece of work. It would be a poem I would read again and again.
Wow! I really like this poem! It was wonderfully written and the words speak volumes. It shows how we as adults still use the silent treatment when we get angry, just as we did as kids. It is a very relatable piece of work that anyone can enjoy. Amazing work!!!
Very intersting subject to write about. I really enjoyed it though. I love dreamcatchers! They are both beautiful and magical. I believe they protect our dreams from evil. Short and sweet, this poem is great! It is well written and very ingaging.
This poem describes very well how life really is on the streets. You really get into the readers head with this one. I felt the pain they were going through and my heart was breaking for them. This piece was well written and can really make people stop and think.
Wow! This poem really speaks to anyone who writes poetry. I found it to be very well written and it says so much about the poet's mind. Anyone who writes poetry should be able to relate to this piece. I thought it was quite enjoyable. It is a poem that all poet's wish they could write.
I really enjoyed this poem. It was fun and entertaining. I would expect to see something like this in a children's holiday book. It would be perfect to read to a child at bedtime. This poem works to bring joy to kids and the young at heart. You did a wonderful job!!!
Oh, what asweet little poem. It makes me think about my grandmother. It is very well written from a child's point of view.It would be great in a book of children's poetry. I haven't read a poem that takes me back to my childhood in a lot of years. This one took me back to those rainy days in a small town. Love it!!!
I really enjoyed this! I think we have all felt this way at some point in our life. I know I've been there plenty of times. This was beautifully written.I found it to be very relatable. It reminds me of when I was younger, and actually there have been times in the last few years I have felt this way a lot.This was an amazing poem!!
Wow! This is a poem that I can relate to. Anyone who has been hurt in some way could. It takes me back to a few years ago when I was hurt by a friend. It makes me think about what she did and helps me to remember that I no longer have to deal with her drama. Excellent poem!!
I found this poem interesting and enjoyable to read. It seems to me like you are comparing the oragutan and giraffe to two friends who often have small differences. It sounds like the giraffe is always putting the orangutan down and never really believing in her friend. It was very well written.
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