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Review of Too Late  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* Great rhythm and rhyme
*Note1* I noticed, that, two times you begin a verse with "And". I, personally try to avoid starting a sentence with "And". Don't ask me why it just doesn't feel right!! :-S
*Note1* This poem shows emotion and feeling!!

Overall: Great poem with emotion and a feeling of missed love!

Write On!!!

Alex
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Another cocky and funny (semi) poem that really makes me feel something... Isn't that the point???
Write ON!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great idea! One thing though how about making activities that they could do together?
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great poem that I think has got to be worth giving an awardicon to.
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Review of This world  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey Alex~~~Learning POETRY!!! I really like this poem that has powerful meaning. A meaning a lot of us don't heed. I like your style and the only thing I would do to change it is that after "who don't mind..." (l. 18) put a comma to make "don't matter" more valued.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice sensitive poem, Only problem is watch the capitals and the beginning of each sentence. Otherwise PERFECTO!!!
Write on!!!
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Review of The Maze  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice poem but the rhythm is a bit more broken down then it should be...
If you more specifications on how to improve this poem more e-mail me and i'll gladly do so.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice poem. Make the font bigger and the writing style is weird, in my opinion but i've never seen it before so...
Anyway great poem and good job for the book
Write on!!!
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Review of The Placid Sands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem with great rhyme and meter. I think you should enter a contest with this poem you might who knows win!!! One tiny thing though: Your second line should not have been capitalized like the other second lines and the very first line doesn't need a question mark just a colon or coma.
Write on!!!
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Review of Sorrow's face  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem I love it so much!!! One thing though, try to find a more powerful word apart from 'death '. 'Fatality' perhaps???
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Review of Shame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Great poem but could be more musical!!!! A job well done though!!!
Write on
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Review of You and I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Beautiful poem about one couple whos waiting for the right time. I love it!!! Great rhymes, one question though why did you indent???
Write on!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
YES!!!! Another smoker who stopped succesfully!!! great description and imagination of the demons!!!!
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Review of Love and Hate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing poem i feel you REALLY deserve 5 stars for this poem!!!! I just love it !!
Keep writing
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Review of Night Nerves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Great imagery, one thing though to make the poem more abstract change the part with the remote control it brings the reader back from dreamworld!!!!
Keep writing!!
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