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Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh and took me back to an exam I took in science class in high school. I failed on purpose. I decided that if life wasn't going to reward me I was not going to try anymore. I am happy you passed and you did a great job.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An engaging exploration that invited me to reflect on the current political landscape with a fresh perspective. Great job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Non disclosure agreements are not legally binding if it is covering up a crime like lying about radio station jobs or something.
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Review of Not worth it  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Please no harming?

Your poem is charming.

I had to review it my first thought was alarming.

Keep on sewing you love it I'm knowing.

The feminine strength from your spirit is showing.

It's your saga watch your drama.

Your source energy is Allah.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What you say is true. We are in "Earth Prison" because of the earths weight on time space. It is our home not a real prison but energetically.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a great job. I almost cried seriously.
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Review of Not being loved.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your worth is not assigned by how much your father loves you. Your father is a man and human beings make lots of mistakes. Your dad loves you. Your worth comes from God and if God says you are worthy no man can convince you of different. The mind of man is the mouth of God. Be kind to yourself. Tell yourself you are worthy. As long as one person sees you as a success, you can not fail. Be that person for yourself. Hope it helps.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
What is your problem you can not repair it?

You actually think that people are carrots?

What do you do with those things might I ask?

Eating them in your corn beef hash?

You and Robert got mad because you both almost got beat up.

He left his niece $100 in cash this morning to clean up.

Do not know Patricia what you thought you would do?

You can't play a carrot with peoples minds you can't screw?

My assets and income you will not burn up.

Patricia he already grew and picked his turnip.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am a 50 year old woman who is being financially held hostage in my roommates home. I have filed 4 cases, called the police several times, contacted the DA, the DOJ, the FBI, NO ONE WILL HELP ME. I promise by the time you reach my old age you will not have to go through this. Ok?
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Review of The Eagles  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fishes smart enough to swim deeper than the net,

find it difficult to not get upset.

It doesn't matter if your in the middle or on fringes;

Even the eagles can't catch all the fishes.

Trying to catch this one you will regret.

God created fishes, this time you will throw it back show some respect.
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Review of Eyore Days  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
You don't have to feel alone choose a subject and write a poem.
Choose a word that goes with the times;
Then choose another that with it rhymes.
Before you know it you will reach for that quill.
Your paper will miraculously fill.
The inspiration you need comes from God of course.
Pure positive energy is your source.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved reading your poem about complaints. It has forced me to review my day and recall every time I did it. Great job!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this very simple and to the point.
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Review of Feral Mama Cat  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Token Jester? My blue dream catcher. Not wearing silk but polyester. Feral cats, coming back, someone took their lives off track.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
They issue you your own bowl and spoon when you go to jail. No comfort in that. Careful what you find comfort in.
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Review of Remembering You  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
The quality of the poem shines through its emotional depth. It blends together vivid imagery and poignant sentiments that truly resonate with anyone who has experienced loss. The language is both simple and profound, making it accessible yet deeply moving. It evokes a range of feelings—from joy in recalling fond memories to sorrow in recognizing the absence of someone so dear. Awesome job!
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Review of Get on your bike.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece offers great value in terms of its ability to provoke thought and evoke feelings. "Get on Your Bike" is a delightful read that encapsulates the bittersweet nature of human connections. Great job.
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Review of Homonymic Poetry  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a delightful read that serves as a gentle reminder of why being on time matters. Its engaging style and meaningful message make it a worthwhile read.
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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It sounds like you may have some memories of your childhood that maybe unpleasant? Nothing that anyone does or says to you has anything to do with you. It is always about them. Try to not take those things personal. The way others treat you is a reflection of how they feel about themselves. Let go of past memories if they keep you in bondage.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Gangs started because of government employees stealing civilians inheritances. It became a competition between cities. You had mothers and fathers changing names to claim other peoples money and giving it to their undeserving children who go out into the world and do with it what undeserving people with money do. "MC" is an international law term. It is not just rap music they use our money to make it is all music. "Mariah Carey" "MC Lyte" "MC Hammer". They are all government employees.
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Rated: E | (1.5)
find God. you are not sick. stop saying you are sick.
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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am supposed to be rating your poem which was absolutely great yet I must tell you that you are not alone. You have an entire universe inside of you. You are important here and have a purpose only you can fulfill. Do not allow anyone to convince you of otherwise.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
May I suggest that you write what you are grateful for about the things you like least? It will shift your entire life around for the better in just a few lines a day! Awesome idea thank you for sharing.
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Review of Dotty  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dotty was my grandmother and she was a human not a car. She surly got you somewhere though it wasn't very far. The code words you people use who work big pharma, didn't know dotty was driving you directly to her granddaughter karma.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a delightful journey this poem takes you on! "Finding Eternity in Shared Ice Cream, Stolen Sheets, and Lasting Phone Flutters" is a charming exploration of love and connection that feels both intimate and relatable. The title alone evokes a sense of nostalgia and warmth, perfectly setting the stage for the beautiful imagery woven throughout.
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