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Review of Wild Anxiety  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this piece! You have the gift. Keep at it!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
As I read this, I could feel the pain that went into it. I think that is a very strong skill to have. There are some parts that I believe could be worded better to make the rhythm a bit smoother.

Like this:
"As time presses onward, the memory of her will be lost."
try this
"As time presses onward, her memory will be lost."

Just a bit smoother.

This was a good read, I'm looking forward to checking your other stuff out as well.

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Marlow
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Review of Lickety_Split  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hahah, this is a funny one.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
No! Roam! Feel the open road. I disagree with what this says, but god writing.
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Review of A Morning Walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Good writing, but not very formed together.
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Review of Three Haiku  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a great work of writing. I enjoyed it a lot, keep at it.
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Review of it used to be  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh I like this a lot! Please read my poem "I was here" I think you'd like it. Same theme (ish)
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Review of Insert title here  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
We have all been lied to
We do not need to know hate
to realize love

This is a great great great line. I loved this poem. Keep at it.
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Review of Telling Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like the refrain of "I threw the clock away" this piece overall has a good rhythm and was a pleasure to read.
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Review of Ghost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Ohhh, I liked this! You might be interested in checking out some of my work. I have the same theme in a few of mine. Good writing!
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Review of The Selkie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is well written. I liked it.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Reminds me a little bit of Joseph Conrad's "Heart of Darkness" and "The Grey"
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Review of Jack Frost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Well written. I enjoyed this piece.
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Review of Unicorn Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The free verse is always a little disorienting. But I liked this one. Good job.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is interesting. I'm honestly not sure what to make of it. I like rhyme so I enjoyed that.
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Review of Sky Below  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You did really well with this one. I actually felt dizzy reading it.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I've felt this feeling before and I'm glad you're getting it out in your writing. This feeling sucks. It's that empty feeling in your gut. That free-falling form.

It is a little repetitive.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I'm only 21 but I still feel this. Where has time gone? And what, at this moment can I do for my future self. For the future of others, too. It's like a pressure that keeps me wanting. Good piece, good thoughts, the only reason for the low-ish reason is that the writing itself has some problems.
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Review of The Soul  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very good piece. I am a person who absolutely believes in a "soul" and believes that it goes on when my physical body does not. I'm not sure I would've labeled this "supernatural" so much as spiritual. Otherwise, I greatly enjoyed this! Keep on keeping on.
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Review of Saving  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. How could you ask that your work have as much emotion as mine? This is fantastic! I beautiful piece of prose. Moving. Beautiful. I would pay anything for such a photo. You've earned a fan!

Keep on, Anne.
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Review of Rainstorm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is absolutely incredible. If you already haven't I would consider trying to get this published in a literary journal.
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Review of the revolt boy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Haha! I'm sorry if this isn't supposed to be funny but I think it really is. The refrain is great and the ending is such a kick!
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Review of Dementia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed the readability of this piece that seems to be mixed in with a certain type of deep literacy. The "twist" comes naturally as do the emotions after it. I would recommend writing a longer piece.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh man, this is where it's at. I love this. The imagery is brilliant and it's short and to the point. The point has a strong impact. Feeling this one quite a bit.
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Review of ABOUT TIME  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow. This is very intense. I love the imagery of catching Dragonflies as it's a memory most of us can relate to. I greatly enjoyed reading this piece.
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