It's an interesting topic, albeit not one I personally find interesting; I rarely shop online, which is why, instead of reading for content and flow, I read for grammar. There is one extremely persistent error that should be fixed immediately if you intend to continue writing.
There're spaces before every punctuation symbol.
You're writing sentences such as this one: "Now who could resist all those designer labels which isn't available in your country and at great value !!Not me ."
The correct way to write it would be: "Now who could resist all those designer labels which isn't (aren't; it's a plural noun that you're describing here) available in your country, and at great value! Not me." You put the spaces after the punctuation, not before. Nearly always, but ALWAYS for semicolons, commas, and periods.
Occasionally you got it right, but for the most part that error persisted throughout. It is incorrect and, honestly, a bit annoying, but other than that I'm sure you did a great job. Keep up and you'll get better, I promise!
This is an excellent question to ask an entire website of writers, which is where the 4 stars are coming from - I always appreciate a good excuse to brainstorm.
So, with that, I'll weigh in with my opinion.
Personally, I think you're exactly right. What we read doesn't define who we are, nor the other way around. Our reading preferences and our real, outright selves are two very different things. However, I ALSO don't think that means there can't be any similarities. For example, I'm a dreamer. I daydream constantly about all manner of things, and that is one of the similarities to my writing/reading styles.
I, however, am also an angry person. If you asked anyone that knew me, they wouldn't be able to tell you that, but I am. It's not my outer appearance that's angry, it's the inner bits. I transfer that into writing as well, especially into my characters and my combat scenes. It's the bit of me that just wants to break out.
That being said, however, I do believe you're right. Thank you for the opportunity to think about something!
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