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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful and moving.

Good luck here. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written and presented.

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful!

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow. This is a lot of information. Good Work. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
You'll probably get more readers if you make each chapter its own post.

Good luck here, Kathleen
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Review of You Could've  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow. So many unanswered questions. Wish I could read the rest of the story!

Good luck here, Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow. Looking forward to reading more!

Good luck, Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Fun to read. Good Luck, Kathleen
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Review of Losing My Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Powerful.

Larger print and indented paragraphs would do this fine work justice.

Good luck, Kathleen
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Review of Celtic Memories  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful presentation!

Good luck, Kathleen
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Review of Crown Of Ashes  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Enjoyed, but you might break it up into chapters/episodes.

Good luck, Kathleen
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Review of Warning Sirens  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Been there! Kathleen
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Review of Echoes of Us  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I usually pass over long poems but this one pulled me in.

Beautiful.

Look forward to more. Kathleen
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Review of My teacher  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
At 5?

My poetry goes back to my teens.

But at 5?

That's potential. Waiting for more!
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
"My lonely tears that I bleed"

Wow. That line will stay with me.

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
. . . and I'm glad I read this poem.

Keep them coming . . .

Kathleen
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Review of Ode to February  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great visual expression of a feeling.

Hope to read more.

Kathleen
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Review of Unspoken  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully presented.

Beautifully written.

Concise but so full of feeling.

Kathleen
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Review of Autumn Passage  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was a visual treat - and a nice poem as well.

Thanks for the effort! Kathleen
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Review of a sinner's vow  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow.

Been there.

But could never have expressed it so vividly.

Looking forward to more.

Kathleen
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Review of The Clockmaker  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Would love to read an extended version of this . . . maybe a short story or a collection of these briefs?

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Beautiful.

Kathleen
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Review of Drowned Out  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow.
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Review of Befores & Afters  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I lived through all that too. Thanks for your memories. They are much like mine. Kathleen

(Also, I can tell you have written professionally!)
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Enjoyed reading your choices. I like to include the "bad girls" too: Rahab, a Canaanite prostitute who helped the Israelites conquer Jericho, and Bathsheba, the woman whose husband King David had killed so he could have her for himself.

The thing I like most about these two women? They are in the lineage of Jesus!
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