Monalisa Vandercox's (monalisadiva25) Reviews

Monalisa Vandercox

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#4715811

Review of Tired

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Great way to put your feelings into words. It has a nice flow and it grabs the reader by the heart strings. ❤ keep writing!!!

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#4683889

Review of save, protect, love

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Healing is a long journey and writing is the way to release the hurt and pain of the past. Thank you for bearing your soul to us. Keep up writing because like me it will help you demolish the demons of the past!!!

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#4679865

Review of Ordinary

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I appreciate your since of beauty in this poem. The art of admiration of all things you see. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing! You have a voice that needs to be heard!

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#4677825

Review of Orchestra

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (5.0)

What a beautiful melody you paint in this poem. I appreciate the way you weave the story by talking about the music and the way it makes you feel as it is being played. Keep writing you have talent!

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#4673670

Review of Frigid Remnants

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This is such a deep poem. It really touches on the darkness that depression has on you. I have been there and it is hard to combat the feeling that pulls on you. This is a very personal and relatable piece of work. Keep writing and putting those emotions out there.

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#4673325

Review of Passing on the Mantle of Shame

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is a powerful use of of words and really tells the story of release. I can not wait to read more of your work. Keep writing and telling your story! Your voice deserves to be heard! Writing from experience and from your own past struggles not only gives us a look into an actual world but always helps you release that pain or energy that held you back.

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#4672319

Review of Beautifully Broken

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Thank you for sharing this. You have a real talent with words! Keep writing you will help others deal with their emotions.

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#4672318

Review of How much longer?

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Thank you for sharing your battle with us. This is something that I can relate to. Depression is an evil thing that really does take so much time out of our lives. It hides in the darkness and holds onto our souls. Keep writing because it will help break that hold it has on you and will also help others in the process.

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#4672316

Review of Hello Darkness My Old Friend

Review by Monalisa Vandercox

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I enjoyed reading your poem. It was a perfect way to express the feeling that depression and darkness leave on the body and mind. Thank you for sharing this!