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Review of POWERLESSLY  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like that the piece has a somewhat general description, allowing the reader to adapt it to his or her own situation.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
As an atheist, I'm afraid I can't support your final comment. However, the rest of the peace is frighteningly on target for today's America. Excellent work!


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Review of SMOKEY'S LESSON  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting story. I easily could picture the scene. And I liked the idea of the boys preparing their own meals. I went camping a few times when I was in the Boy Scouts, but in an area of central NY where there were no bears. And it was so long ago that I don't remember who prepared the meals, but I'm guessing they were nothing special.

One problem I found with your tale was the final sentence. I don't get the rake reference.


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Review of Life Lessons  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Valuable message, J. And thanks for including a word I didn't know - subsume.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a hoof - sorry, hoot. And punny funny! Very well done.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm curious whether or not you wrote this for a specific challenge. At first I wasn't sure if you were trying to make a point (and what that point might be). But looking through it a second time helped me just appreciate it as an interesting look into two personalities – yours and the subject.

Well done,
         Daniel


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoy writing stories set in different times, with characters that have quirky names. (See "The Taming of the Dragon" in my Prose portfolio.) And your story hits those factors with just the offbeat sense of humor I like. I could almost picture myself standing in the crowd, chuckling at the absurdity in front of me. Nicely done.


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Review of Mirror, Mirror  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nicely quirky. I was curious what caused the situation (who wouldn't be?), and initially assumed it would be something either very odd or quite normal. But it worked better as you wrote it - no explanation.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I've been trying to come up with an idea for this challenge, but your entry is much better than anything I've thought of. Nice work.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gotta like that judge. *Cool*


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting tale, and well written. I felt I was there. My only gripe would be that it ended without really ending.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
There's a lot of something in this poem about nothing. I just can't put my finger on exactly what it is. *Crazy*


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, at least it rhymes. *Confused*

Just kidding! It's nicely goofy, and I learned a new word (aspidistras). Don't know when I'll get a chance to use it, but I'm making it a priority. *Cool*


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Review of Worm Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Exceptional! I liked the mystery of 'why is Sam here'? And I particularly liked "Sam mows down another three cookies." But I agree that lavender cookies sound disgusting.

I look forward to sharing this with my wife.


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The title says it all *BigSmile*

I'm many years past my youth, but I clearly remember my snarky teen attitude, and I can easily identify with your "victim."


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked the "which one is the alien" idea. *AlienG*
And I can imagine a similar conversation actually happening some day (if it hasn't already).


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Review of Just a Farmer  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"It’s just a worthless steaming heap" describes much of my early (and some later) writing. Excellent job - funny, and even inspiring.


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Review of Cow Shadows  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice addressment of a strange challenge!


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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I celebrate your fine poem with a rousing cock-a-doodle-do! *BigSmile*


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Review of Old Jokes  Open in new Window.
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Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Like most readers, I'm sure, the final paragraph caught me by surprise. And I can't wait to share the story with my wife. *BigSmile*


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Review of Debunking q  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's all too real.*Rage* *Alien* *Audio3* *Sick*


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Review of Just a Farmer  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As a writer, I was wowed
by your humor, form, reality.
And your success with one great piece
inspires struggling hacks like me.
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Review of Coyote  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice - a well-deserved win!


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Review of Quiet Day  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done, NormaJean! And as a hearing aid wearer, I definitely can relate.


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Review of Short Shrift  Open in new Window.
Review by Dan I Am Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like Sam's taste in beer - a few pints for a half-pint. *Smile*

Well written. And how often does one get the chance to use the expression, "high dudgeon?"


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