Your words flow so mysteriously together its hard to find any faults with them. Each word fits perfectly with the next. It gave me a calming feeling as I read it a few times over. I appreciate the mystery in it, it leaves me weaving my own imagination and thoughts into it. Fantastic job.
I enjoyed reading this it gives the reader a chance for self-reflection.
I did have to read it over a couple of times before getting to that point.
The first verse of your poem tripped me up a bit. This caused me to think more about the flow of poem rather then thinking about the meaning and the feeling your words were working to evoke.
Overall a great read that made me feel grateful to read. It helped me to remember and put faces to the many people that have uplifted me especially during times of struggle.
Given the times we are in, this type of poem is exactlty what inspires me to be grateful for my blessings such as my ability to read and write and to do more of it. So thank you.
Great job, your poem did what I think you set out to achieve with its audience. Be grateful.
I appreciate your honesty and the tips to remember when reviewing. This evoked me to think about the reviews I've received and their authenticity. Reading this has inspired me to give a shot at reviewing someone's work; which I haven't done since joining this site.
Thanks for the good read.
Natasha
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