Hi there! Thank you for the education and the time taken to convey, greatly appreciated. I believe I have updated the entries as per the requirements and your direction. I will send two other poems once written for entry to increase my chances.
Love is light and darkness is the absence of love. I loved once upon a dream but alas without direct inclusion and interaction it dies and darkness prevails yet again. Most of the time we are in darkness. Light only happens once in awhile when we stumble upon it within ourselves.
I gave you what points I have. enjoyed the read thank you for sharing.
Yes, death is an end but also a beginning. We die more than once in life and there are many different reasons. I died when, father died at 12. I died each time I became homeless. I died when my dog passed away. I would give you gift points but I am empty at present, sorry.
On Capital Hill every deal has a string;
When the greedy and corrupt play and sing.
Where money is the focus and law's corrupt.
Where the speaker does keep score without interrupt.
Ensuring that the status quo will never win.
Back in the day their rules were crystal clear,
When money took second versus those held dear.
Justice reigned over the corrupt on Capital Hill.
These days truths are twisted into many lies.
Where they lay in wait greasing their wallets.
Where fake news comes from their flapping lips.
We bare witness to a nation in debt.
Enslaved to the point of collapse and ruin.
Because morality is lost upon a greedy hand.
In God We Trust?!
Wow you're writing is great! Please do keep sharing.
It's written well. I write to rhythms and melodies also. I always have been able to do so, I find the process of creation a good healing wind for the soul.
Very well written. You see all can be achieved if we use the old ancient method of just printing money and funding government at 100% rather than debt chasing and crying broke which is a sad joke. Right now due to restrictions that were lobbied in place we have a reactionary governmental model in practice. Have you ever noticed that in politics present day the powers that be react to things after the tragedies have occurred? A sad truth.
The monetary values are based upon the needs of the few over the many trying to retain their grips on the market they have and not on the infinite value of life itself. We have to stop this practice of trying to place a value upon life.
A single currency where all are equal has to be based on life and its infinite value and not the current idea of a fractured world creating suffering and death through inaction based upon material wealth.
A proactive society is required in order to promote life and sustain it! Global warming is here to stay for example and we all know that the waters are rising so where are the efforts to try and retain land mass?
Please keep writing and I hope my idea takes root with everyone about freeing humanities potential rather than stifling it.
Imagine going through life with memory loss. I tend to forget most things!
I agree with you.
I used to be in charge of multimillion dollar fundraising events but I had no personal life. I lost that job and now I am simply enjoying the opportunity every day represents.
Please feel free to read my portfolio, I reward with GPS.
One of the suggestions that I have for this site is when you are looking for something or someone specific to review that on the pop up you include whether or not I have already given them a review.
Oh you figure this out as you go through the piece; "Oh, I already reviewed it." and move on but this would speed up the process.
Paper wins in their world run with the pursuit of monetary superiority AKA GREED Vs Love (personal experience) sadly.
If you have abilities and capabilities you therefore have a duty to help society. This is what I learned through my efforts with Masonry and the Shrine.
This is as usual, great. I see no room for improvement.
When you are against the wall financially there are times when despair feels like your friend that's true. Look at my art for example. I wish to sing them but having no funds makes it difficult.
But I keep a stiff upper lip as the saying goes and I keep smiling even when I am crying on the inside.
Well you must be a fan of Kabuki Theater your very perceptive. They release their emotions through their performance.
Although you can cap your negative emotions it is healthy to communicate them in such a way as to release them. My way of doing this is through my efforts at writing.
I am going to have to study your works more closely.
I appreciate the opportunity to review your efforts, clearly exceptional.
I have always been enthralled by the flow of time.
I remember as a child hearing this old standard "Patience is a virtue, possess it if you can. Seldom found in woman, yet never found in man." Not sure who said it but I have been trying to prove it wrong ever since.
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.32 seconds at 7:21pm on Sep 07, 2024 via server web1.