It's tough to lose someone you have been with for a long time. Someone who share a big part of your life. But we all lose someone (or something) for a reason. And it's the good memories that the person has left behind that will matter the most. It's sad but I'm sure your mother is proud that you have been strong for her.
Well said. The older people in the society carry with them the legacy of the nation. They have contributed a lot of things that we now enjoy. Theyre like stepping stones to a nation's development and without them and their contributions, we wouldn't be here. It's as simple as that, but most people don't realize it.
The poem was good but you need to put in a lot of emotions. Love is a common subject but not all people can make other people "feel" what it is through words, so make them.
Things happen for a reason. I hope you're not blaming yourself for what had happened. Death opens a lot of doors for life and rebirth.
Perhaps you had witnessed that incident so you could learn something from it. Life is fragile and it can easily slip away. not all people realize that.
There must be some reason behind this poem. Only a few people can appreciate mother darkness but i hope it's not just a way to deviate from the others who seek the light.
Good but add something that has more emotion. Don't make it look like a typical love poem. Love is a common theme but there are always new and fresh ideas that you can add to it.
In a war there is no enemy but war itself. It can be costly but these soldiers know what they're fighting for. You can't correct all the mistakes in this world and you can't make other people see what you see or feel what you feel. But if you have hope like most of the soldiers do, then every life that is lost won't be for vain.
Real friends don't do such things. Those people are just insecure or maybe jealous of you. Whatever others may say about you, you must remember that no one knows you better but yourself. Don't let these things get into you, theyre not worth the time.
Some people look for things that they already possess. What's right in front of them, they usually disregard. And by the time they find out, they lose it. Don't invest all your attention and love to a person who doesn't deserve it. Sooner or later she will realize her mistake.
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