Accolades! Well thought out and well written, I find it to be very eloquent and reminiscent of the era for which it is meant.
Do keep writing and keep up the magnificent work. Your resounding wit is infectious and perfectly delightful, the more you write, the more I see it shines through! I always say Practice makes Perfect!!!!!
This had to be the most well written heart felt poem I have read in a long time. Your words ripped through my soul. I can actually feel this woman's turmoil and pain. You are indeed very talented, keep up the excellent work. Poetry, good poetry to me is when you can ignite the readers soul with words and visions, this is outstanding for you have done just that!
These lines here alone.... broke my heart.
The pane of snow releases a sliver of sun
upon a cold floor, embracing a mother
who just discovered no baby will grow where one was once torn.
I too know such feelings and pain, thank you for sharing. This is very impressive work. Accolades.
Very well researched it seems from what I see so far. You are quite exceptional at captivating and holding the reader's interest. Accolades to you! Sometimes I struggle with that as I am presently working on my first novel, would you happen to have any advice for a novice such as me? I would love to hear any. I look forward to reading more, it is a very well developed and intriguing story so far. Good Luck and please keep writing away!!!!!
wow, the words you chose for this poem are enchanting.
my favorite lines by far--- to compare the affairs of the heart with that of music and the violin is thought provoking and simply beautiful.
a violin that gave itself to your hearing
there for your solitary heart to achieve
the message that formed itself
naturally out of the string of notes.
Quite lovely! Nice emotional range and appeal. I only wished it were longer, I certainly hope there will be more poetry of yours to read and review!
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