The first person in the poem wants to end a relationship with his lover?
The death is described in a most horrible ways!
There seem to be a clash of ideas between the two lovers.
The final solution for his problem is death?
As always you have a different style of writing.
It is like the writer is atoning for his sins by way of washing at the sea.
The first person in the poem has been fighting to do the just and nothing but the just.
It is complicated, your writing, but I like the style .
I have read your poem 'living in excess' and like to make a review about it.
actually what is 'a mountain of a mess'? you keep telling about it in your poem.Yes, it tells about a life not normal by any standards but where is it? A prison, maybe?
Yes it is very emotional indeed!.as you sad passion is our peace and it never leaves the soul in the end, that is death!You write in simple language and that is what caught my eye.Some poems are very difficult to read and understand but not yours.
keep it up,
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